Open Poetry #8 |
Words fall... |
jennie may* Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 122 |
words fall through the cracks of my floor you don't knock on my door anymore we only have silence streched between us two worlds broken beneath us and a memory of your smile the light of my entire life |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
do we live in the same house? very pretty. sad , but pretty Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JennieMay~ A sad little render - but oh, so tender. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Beverley Member
since 2000-07-09
Posts 97England |
Beautiful, I think you just sang my life. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
A very beautiful little poem Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
the anguish of lost love is beautifully expressed volumes in these ingenious lines |
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