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jennie may*
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0 posted 2000-07-10 01:34 AM


words fall
through the cracks of my
floor

you don't knock on my
door anymore

we only have
silence
streched between us

two worlds
broken
beneath us

and a memory of your
smile

the light of my entire life


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Jamie
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Blue Heaven
1 posted 2000-07-10 01:47 AM


do we live in the same house?
very pretty. sad , but pretty

Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".


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Florida's Foreverly Shores
2 posted 2000-07-10 04:38 AM


JennieMay~
A sad little render - but oh, so tender.
~*Marge*~


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Beverley
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since 2000-07-09
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England
3 posted 2000-07-10 04:42 AM


Beautiful, I think you just sang my life.
tracie66
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Australia
4 posted 2000-07-10 06:14 AM


A very beautiful little poem  
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


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singapore
5 posted 2000-07-11 02:09 AM


the anguish of lost love is beautifully expressed volumes in these ingenious lines
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