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Open Poetry #8

Loves eye's

Michael G
Senior Member

since 2000-06-25

Posts 579
Nashville

0 posted 2000-07-30 04:06 PM

I have her fascination in my mind,
The way she raises her eyes
When I kiss her upon bare skin,
And gently caress her back again.

With only candles to give us light
I gently hold her through the night.
The clothes discarded, we feel as one
Her to me, as this is love.

Once more her eyes, in sublime delight
I kiss her shoulder in candle light,
And see the love we both do share
This love of life that keeps me there.

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2000-07-30 04:13 PM

gotta love the romance, here...so sweet...soft, and comfy as a feather bed...

nice work.

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

2 posted 2000-07-30 04:14 PM

A simple biological function can turn out to be such a very pleasant delight. This is a very sensual piece you've penned here Michael well done indeed.

Marina
Member Elite

since 2000-02-10

Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario

3 posted 2000-07-30 04:23 PM

Very soft and romantic Michael. Sounds like a perfect evening.

Marina

It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen
Marina Crossley

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

4 posted 2000-07-30 04:49 PM

my my my...
my eyes did so enjoy this lil' gem...
and this so perfectly proves my
point about your poetry,
very, very, nice Michael
later-sensual-poet-gator

jm

There are places inside our souls -
that have never been touched.
There are places inside our hearts -
that need to be loved this much.
~jm~

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