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MMoonchild
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0 posted 2000-07-30 12:23 PM

Hidden Daydreams

The dawning brings gray clouds again
the spiritless still sleeps.
I come to join the living
and in words of soft, I keep
this head held higher, as the day
begins to stretch it's arms.
And dream my thoughts and wantings of
those eyes that hold my charms...

Were you a daydream hidden
in my nighttime shrouded mind,
to overwhelm and hold me close
in arms of love to find?
Or are you just my fantasy
I keep on falling for
In and out, to strain this heart
It's haunting, to allure?

A mystery, I keep within
these little sparks to flame
"if only's" could become the now
and "pastings" lost their blame
And every feeling hid deep down
would spring their gift on you
The moments of the "next times"
would be sharing loving, new.

MM
7*2k
thank you's to beowolf_26 and Bill for their wonderful morning inspiration

**and I coined the word pastings..as in past not paste...poetic license you know..*w

[This message has been edited by MMoonchild (edited 07-30-2000).]

ethome
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since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
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1 posted 2000-07-30 12:41 PM

"If onlys could become the now
and pastings lost their blame
and every feeling hid deep down
would spring their gift on you.
The moments of the next times
would be sharing loving you."

I can say one thing for sure Maureen, that is beautiful poet talk. You're just a hopeless romantic poet and that lingo flows out of you like a fountain......and you do it so well on top of all that......write on!!

EWDrake
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since 2000-07-30

Posts 183
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2 posted 2000-07-30 12:50 PM

Wonderful job, MM, I especially enjoy

Were you a daydream hidden
in my nighttime shrouded mind,
to overwhelm and hold me close
in arms of love to find?

...a hint of retrospect, a hope for the future. Very nicely said, even in a query... *S

EWDrake

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

3 posted 2000-07-30 12:53 PM

Hi Maureen,
I believe that this is the poem that you were working on this morning? If so, well done, as you always do. I couldn't wait to read it, and the wait was certainly worth it.

Bill....

MMoonchild
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4 posted 2000-07-30 01:51 PM

E... I posted this a little too quickly using it as an example showing a new poet how the forum works..and will need to do a bit of editing... I hate to rhyme with 2 words the same at the end there..thank you for making me notice it....and yes a hopeless romantic...isn't that awful...just what this world needs another of...

~~soft smiles
M

Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

5 posted 2000-07-30 02:02 PM

The dawning brings gray clouds again
the spiritless still sleeps.
I come to join the living
and in words of soft, I keep
this head held higher, as the day
begins to stretch it's arms.
And dream my thoughts and wantings of
those eyes that hold my charms...

Were you a daydream hidden
in my nighttime shrouded mind,
to overwhelm and hold me close
in arms of love to find?
Or are you just my fantasy
I keep on falling for
In and out, to strain this heart
It's haunting, to allure?

A mystery, I keep within
these little sparks to flame
"if only's" could become the now
and "pastings" lost their blame
And every feeling hid deep down
would spring their gift on you
The moments of the "next times"
would be sharing loving you

Proof that romance still exists. wonderful write romantic one.

MMoonchild
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6 posted 2000-07-30 02:08 PM

hmm why thank you EW....I like that EW...and welcome....you will enjoy the warmth here

~~soft smile
Maureen

MMoonchild
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7 posted 2000-07-30 05:25 PM

Yes, Bill this was the poem inspired by your words...and it's easy to be inspired after reading the poems you continue to display on here..
~~soft smiles
Maureen

beowulf_26
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since 1999-06-29

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8 posted 2000-07-30 10:13 PM

I'm deeply flattered to have inspired you. I've been called many things, most of which are too salty to repeat on this forum, far from being someone's inspiration. I'm glad that I can help, and offer my ear any time in the future.

As for the poem itself, it was deeply felt and appreciated. Your work indeed shines as the angel who wrote it.

serenity blaze
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9 posted 2000-07-31 02:24 AM

softly sung, Maureen...totally captivating.

MMoonchild
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10 posted 2000-07-31 08:25 AM

Mark thank you I greatly appreciate all your kind words..and yes I have discovered as I age the romanticism still exists in me..even more so than before.
~~soft smiles
Maureen

MMoonchild
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11 posted 2000-07-31 08:27 AM

beowulf_26

I have been called many things..never an angel..but I sort of like that..I will be the inspired angel...hmmmm see there you go again. placing thoughts in this head of mine..thank you
~~soft smiles
Maureen

MMoonchild
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12 posted 2000-07-31 08:29 AM

...thank you for the nice words,serenity

...I have had a hard time getting back on line to respond..but finally made it...
~~softly
Maureen

EWDrake
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13 posted 2000-07-31 09:46 PM

Wonderful posing!

Were you a daydream hidden
in my nighttime shrouded mind,
to overwhelm and hold me close
in arms of love to find?

I love this line...
Well done, Maureen,

Evan

MMoonchild
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14 posted 2000-08-01 12:37 PM

Evan you hit me twice...sometimes thats nice
~~softly
M

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