Open Poetry #8 |
Wounds of Old |
Mistikman Senior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 682San Jose, CA, USA |
Every one in awhile I look back And relive those wounds of old I painfully feel them opening up, Warm blood long since gone cold All it took was a familiar experience A girl I desired wanted me not Her rejection was kind and gentle And I doubt she gave it a second though But to me the memories returned Of a love gone horribly wrong I felt as I did before, dirty and pained As if I were in a place I didn't belong She was sorry, she had other plans I had heard the lines all before It would be easier if it were no But her gentleness sent me to the floor I wish these wounds would heal But they always seem to return Sparked by another girl so sweet For whom my heart comes to yearn |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Me too...James |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
This aches...the wounds of old never seem to leave until wounds of new replace them....deep and powerfully painful writing~ |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Mistikman... I don't think anything hurts quite as much as being rejected, especially in matters of the heart! You wrote this well.... I felt the ache.... ~~ To Live is to Give ~~ |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Mistikman, how very wounded it the heart when rejected. I felt your pain. Take care, Juls |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I understand the pain you feel. But I'm also glad that you aren't letting old 'wounds' keep you from trying. Someday, Mistikman, someday. I promise! |
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LoveBug
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Mistik, I can relate to this so well. I also feel the old wounds surfacing over and over again. I hope your wounds will heal soon, my friend. "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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