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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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You've given me a thousand words that wrap me in love's blanket, then caress me in the stillness of the night... I look upon a face that has some recognition in it, and it always seems to whisper, "this is right"... You entertain and satisfy the longing that I feel to share a part of me that no one else will need... And deep inside this lonely heart, a flame of something flickers, as I take your gift of words and start to read... I've gently contemplated reasons why I could be thinking that your words are meant to stir my heart this way... I've been around enough to know that love has many seasons, ever-changing, ever-growing, every day... I've told myself to not give in to all the beautiful things I read, and not to give daydreams a place to start... But then I lose all self-control because I know your words are going directly from my eyes into my heart... So, I accept your gift of words, and from deep inside this poet's heart, I give to you the words that I must say... I need someone to listen, feel the meaning, understand it, though my words don't always see the light of day... And if, somehow, by chance our words should meet, and maybe dance, and compliment each other like they seem to do... Then both of us will have the satisfaction of believing that this gift we share is shared by very few... These words I give to you... ~~ To Live is to Give ~~ [This message has been edited by Sunny1 (edited 07-30-2000).] |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Beautifully written, sunny1, as only you can do. jwesley |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Oh Sunny, Now I know that your heart is as soft and as gentle, as one of my very dear turledoves. I am very glad to have stopped by this morning to read this very telling and expressive writing that you have done. Bill.... |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Oh, by the way Sunny, I had to come back to cast my vote!! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
AAWWWWWW girl you did it again...sometimes I think you are my gemini twin so close are your words to my heart...you have my admiration, and my vote never say never |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Wonderful poem of promise and hope. Good read tender one. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
jwesley... Thank you and I'm glad you liked!! ~~ To Live is to Give ~~ |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Bill... I am so glad that you liked this one, and turtledoves are so beautiful..thank you for the compliment!! (And your vote!) Paula...I always enjoy hearing from you!! Thank you for reading, and your wonderful words.....Ah, but I am a Scorpio, through and through!!! Mark...I'm glad this poem conveyed hope... that's so hard to come by these days! I also appreciate you coming by to read this....thank you! ~~ To Live is to Give ~~ |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
A beautiful rendering Sunny! So lovely are the words you've penned in such a positive and sentimental light! Wonderful!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
KIt.... Thank you so much, and I'm glad you caught the positive part. I think there's already enough negative stuff in this world!! ~~ To Live is to Give ~~ |
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Toddles Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 396New Orleans, Louisiana |
Excellent! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sunny1~ This is really delightful. Thanks for sharing such a positive outlook. ~Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Toddles......Thank you!!!!!! Marge.....Hi, and I'm glad you liked it!!! ~~ To Live is to Give ~~ |
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