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Touch Of Fantasy
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Touch Of Fantasy |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“TOUCH OF FANTASY” I stare at you, as you peacefully sleep, I’m in wonderment of your radiance and your beauty. Knowing the warmth of your gentle kiss, And the tenderness you carry in your heart, for me. Sleep my precious lady, for when you awake, On my fantasy island you will have arrived, You will be coming to this magical place. And be transformed into a princess, in paradise. The magic of this land may overcome you, The forest fairies and their maidens will cast their spell. Their tiny wings fluttering as my heart does, With wands casting fairy dust, floating down, as it fell. I listen softly to the majestic forest, The cool night breeze tickles the leaves, and they tense. The flowering bouquets all along the path, Their fragrances all smell, just like sweet incense. A tree house built in the tallest tree, Appearing, as if it were there in the sky. I watched you from the path the moment you arrived, You were frightened, because this way you have never been by. A tear rolled down your cheek from your eye, And was carried to me by the breeze. As it touched my face, I wiped it away, And you smiled once again, and were pleased. Then I finally arrived to meet you, You turned and faced me with piercing blue eyes. They twinkled in the rays of the moonlight, And I know my heart would never say goodbye. A cool breeze sang as it moved through the tree house, The one that appeared, as if it were there in the sky. We embraced and danced close until we were one, I don’t know why, but my heart started to cry. I feel your breasts warm against me, You said with your soft lips, “Kiss me with all of your zeal”! I touched you and then lay with your softness, And I knew that this magical fantasy was real. And then, I stare at you once again, as you peacefully sleep, I’m still in wonderment of your radiance and your beauty. Knowing the warmth of your gentle kiss, And the tenderness you carry in your heart, for me. Bill Charles |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Oh, Bill.... This one captured my heart and my vote!! It had all the mystical beauty of a long ago fairy tale, and I can't resist a treehouse!! You know I love your writing, but this one deserves a special place at the top....thankyou for this, my friend! ~~ To Live is to Give ~~ |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Bill I will never get to write that poem inspired by you if you keep posting these beautiful thoughts..it's making my mind swirl...hmmmmmm...I will have to go off line to do this I think ~~softly enjoying the morning posts Maureen |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Very, very well done Bill... jwesley |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi Sunny, I am so pleased that I could capture your heart with this humble poem of mine. I really enjoyed writing it and glad that you came by to read it. And for voting for it my dear friend, I graciouly thank you. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
jwesley, Thank you so much for coming by, and for the kind comments about my poem. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Bill, What can I say that I haven't said before? I just love your poems! So romantic and tender and well written. Once again, incredable job. You have my vote  rosepetals25 |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Bill-if they only knew how often we did this. There is so much peace upon the night-time gaze. Great one again my friend and please indulge us with more. I stare at you, as you peacefully sleep, I’m in wonderment of your radiance and your beauty. Knowing the warmth of your gentle kiss, And the tenderness you carry in your heart, for me |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
For fear of repeating myself, I'll not say all the things I would normally say. This is simply breath-taking. --You can either take me as I am...or you can watch me as I go.-- |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
This is a wonderful piece. So beautifully written. So filled with emotion. I loved it *sighs* |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Bill~ Certain to catch her eye ... ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi rosepetals25, I really thought that I had replied already, but I see that I haven't. Oh well, it must have been the afternoon spent at the river. Thank you for your gracious comments. And, thank you for your vote. Mark Bohannan Hi Mark, yes, so many times I fear. I try to continually work on poems, but at times I am overwhelmed and need to take a break. Thank you once again for stopping by, and for your kind comments. |
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ddgoose Member
since 2000-07-25
Posts 250Baltimore, MD, USA |
Bill You have my vote on this one. The only thing I can say is WOW - nicely done! And then, I stare at you once again, as you peacefully sleep, I’m still in wonderment of your radiance and your beauty. Knowing the warmth of your gentle kiss, And the tenderness you carry in your heart, for me. You make me swoon with goosebumps all over! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi ddgoose, Thank you again for coming by and the kind comments about my poem. And, thank you for the vote. "You make me swoon with goosebumps all over"! Ah, goosebumps you say, wow is all I can reply. |
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