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Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

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highways, & byways, for now

0 posted 2000-07-30 10:25 AM

“LOVE OF YOU”

We were in the meadow this morning,
As we lay naked in the morning dew.
Our bodies embraced each other,
And I could feel the warmth of you.

I felt the passions as we lay there,
And I kissed your soft lips so dear.
I whispered in your ear sweet nothings,
And you whispered back that you cared.

Your eyes glistened with excitement, as you held me,
And I felt your soft warm breasts.
I’ll never forget you this morning,
My love for you will never rest.

I’ve been lonely, heartbroken, and saddened,
My shattered heart was a terrible case.
You have touched my deepest emotions,
And stirred my soul to move out of that place.

You’re an inspiration that has touched me,
And my fingers flow with words for you.
You have taken me to the heavens,
Not to fall again I pray, or to be blue.

One day soon I pray we will be together,
Always knowing sweet soft lips, which make me shake.
You know that I love you so very much,
That I fear my fragile heart just might break.

I question where you came from my darling,
Were you a daydream hidden in my mind?
Tell me my sweetheart I beseech thee,
Are you really someone real, that I’ll be able to find?

Bill Charles

MMoonchild
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since 2000-07-13

Posts 1715
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1 posted 2000-07-30 10:29 AM

Bill I love this line

Were you a daydream hidden in my mind?

so many poetic thoughts have just risen in my mind...
thank you
Maureen

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

2 posted 2000-07-30 10:44 AM

Just leave a copy of this poem in the mailbox of anyone you have a thing for Bill.
Once they read how yearning and beautiful it is they will come running......Then you'll be able to bring that dream right into reality.

Just a small suggestion......I really and truly don't want to get you shot or anything like that.

Great poem I enjoyed as usual....ethome..

Kit McCallum

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since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

3 posted 2000-07-30 10:51 AM

Oh Bill ... she must be more than just a dream for a man who's penned such romantic and enchanting thoughts ... lovely poem!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

4 posted 2000-07-30 10:55 AM

Hi MMoonchild,
Good to see you again Maureen. And I am very glad that you like the line that came out for you. If I helped a little with a few poetic thoughts, then I'll be waiting in anticipation for your next writing.

Hi ethome,
Thank you for your most gracious and sweet words about this writing that I have done. Perhaps I might just try your suggestion, and perhaps maybe one will come, even if she walks.

Well, about your suggestion, I have never been able to outrun a bullet. Lordy, they move really fast.

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
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5 posted 2000-07-30 10:58 AM

Good morning Kit...Thank you once again for your gracious comments. I'm very glad that you liked this poem, and that I could express some of myself in it.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2000-07-30 11:04 AM

Excellent writing Bill...this poem makes me think of my lack of trust due to being used and hurt. I have been talking to women about this issue...I tell them I don't trust women and they tell me they don't trust men...so many have been hurt and betrayed.
Are they really available or ready for a relationship...are they willing to take a chance and give some of their time? James

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

7 posted 2000-07-30 11:18 AM

Hi Bill...
Anyone who expresses themselves as
eloquently as you always do, will never have
a problem finding an ear that is eager to
listen. Your words put the 'love' back into
love!

~~ To Live is to Give ~~

MMoonchild
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since 2000-07-13

Posts 1715
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8 posted 2000-07-30 11:34 AM

James, James, James..you have got to be more positive...

and E...you made me laugh this morning...again
I'm sorry Bill I couldn't help but respond ..and I am working on that poem right now..be looking for it..great inspiration here this morning for me even if that darn sun still isn't shining brightly yet....
Maureen

Bill Charles
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9 posted 2000-07-30 12:38 PM

jmlee12345,
Thank you for your kind comments. Just believe that there is someone out there for you, and give it a chance. That special someone will pop up out of the blue, and knock you off your feet. Good wishes to you.

Bill Charles
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Posts 10619
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10 posted 2000-07-30 12:45 PM

Hi Sunny,
Once again your eloquent words touch me with your comments to this writing. Words escape me except to say thank you.

Bill Charles
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11 posted 2000-07-30 12:48 PM

MMoonchild,
Well Maureen, I am holding my breath, as I wait for your posting. Thank you for your kind comments, and inspiration will be upon me soon, as I go down to the river and contemplate.

rosepetals25

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since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
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12 posted 2000-07-30 01:07 PM

Bill,
I signed in this afternoon and smiles seeing a new poem from you. You didn't let me down. It is a wonderful poem that so many of can understand. Well done

rosepetals25

Tennessee Angel
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since 2000-06-03

Posts 661
Tennessee

13 posted 2000-07-30 02:55 PM

Penned perfection, Bill!

Bill Charles
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14 posted 2000-07-30 03:48 PM

Hi rosepetals25,
Thank you for signed on this afternoon and coming by to read my poem. Thank you for your always gracious comments.

Tennessee Angel,
Hi Angel, thank you for this kind comment for my poem.

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

15 posted 2000-07-30 04:50 PM

I believe the lady is real, how else could you write with such emotion. Very tender
Liz

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

16 posted 2000-07-30 07:21 PM

Hi Elizabeth,
Thank you for stopping by, and for your kind comments. Perhaps a lady in the recesses of a mind, or perhaps a lady real, tenderness can be both, or can it?

ddgoose
Member

since 2000-07-25

Posts 250
Baltimore, MD, USA

17 posted 2000-07-30 07:43 PM

Bill

Emotions that are in this poem have got to be felt first before you can write about them. Especially the way you have written them. If she is real, good luck with her!

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

18 posted 2000-07-30 08:47 PM

Hello ddgoose,
Again, I welcome your gracious comments. Thanks so much for stopping by.

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