An attempt at Haiku--BUTTERFLY

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Open Poetry #8

An attempt at Haiku--BUTTERFLY

kitkat
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since 2000-01-11

Posts 878
Nova Scotia

0 posted 2000-07-30 03:16 PM

Butterfly

Little Butterfly
Fluttering upon the wind
you tickle my Heart

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You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face
and show the world all the love in your heart
Then people are gonna treat you better
You're gonna find, yes you will
That your beautiful as you feel.~~~ Carol King

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2000-07-30 03:32 PM

KitKat~
Not just an 'attempt' .... SUCCESS !
And a lovely Haiku it is.
Perfect !
I do caution you ... they can be addictive !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

2 posted 2000-07-30 03:53 PM

KitKat,
Very nice..I enjoyed..

Bill...

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

3 posted 2000-07-30 05:08 PM

perfect Kathy..and arent these fun..
Marge is right..once ya start Haikuin'
ya just kkep writing in counted syllables LOL
anything about butterflies is my fancy
take care
jm

There are places inside our souls -
that have never been touched.
There are places inside our hearts -
that need to be loved this much.
~jm~

Jamie
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since 2000-06-26

Posts 3168
Blue Heaven

4 posted 2000-07-30 05:54 PM

everyone loves butterflies,, and you did a wonderful job with them in this.....

Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

5 posted 2000-07-30 06:25 PM

I agree with Marge-you hit success in this one. Well done.

kitkat
Senior Member

since 2000-01-11

Posts 878
Nova Scotia

6 posted 2000-07-30 08:06 PM

Thanks for your replies. Wanted to try something new.
And Marge-Janet I think this will be addicting

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