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Out (with thanx to bsq, for inspiration)
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Out (with thanx to bsq, for inspiration) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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suck things out, so parts bend in, stuff things in, so parts stick out... A lip that's born too wide, made thin-- 'til fashion begs for collagen... I just write poetry and cry, and wonder who the hell am I? (and so will they... should suture give. New Suit of law, and they forgive. Allowing kiss on other cheek... wiping spittle, love tends to leave.) But O! What beauty to behold! --I'll keep my pen. my soul's not sold. For butterfly, of rhyme's reknown, is naught but that a worm's grown old. [This message has been edited by serenity (edited 07-30-2000).] |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
this is good, serenity, very good ... great little read ... (and so will they... should suture give. New Suit of law, and they forgive. some profound thoughts in this one ... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I just write poetry and cry, and wonder who the hell am I? =================== But O! What beauty to behold! --I'll keep my pen. my soul's not sold. For butterfly, of rhyme's reknown, is naught but that a worm's grown old. ================= well you know what I always say baby... ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ as are poets in serenity  me loves inspiration from a friend and its even better when its squirrel evoked lol love ya me.... (sleeping for the both of us tonite me twin?) silly silly question  |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
very good Serenity...Great read........ "I just write poetry and cry and wonder who the hell am I?" I know what you mean for sure but it does get it all out. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I thank you all, with a smile, and now I serenely soft-shoe my exit...off to bed!!! thanks again, friends. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Serenity~ poetry anytime my friend  well doneTracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I like this one..you've lead with your heart here and that's good!  |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
If I can inspire works like this out of you, then I know I have a purpose. Thanks, s'en! Mike |
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