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What the Hell
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What the Hell |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
What the Hell I begin... like a hunter chasing his prey. Moving in quickly for the desired kill before she has a chance to turn and run away. She must feel... the way of a hunted prey so desperatly fleeing the hunters will to kill as he maneuvers into position and reveals all the precision of his skill. I listen... as she speaks those words I know so well "Slow down James...what the hell ! ! ! Can you wait for my feelings to formulate?" I wonder... about the message she will convey. Will I be a survivor for another day or will she speak those words "go away". I must... take some time to think yet my mind only registers blank. May I reveal all the love I wish to share. A desire hard to fulfil if she doesn't care. I want to move forward and take some action. Her beauty has enticed my soul now my heart yearns for satisfaction. If she was a lovely damsel in distress I would know exactly what to do but if she flees from a heart so true what can I do? I must let go... this I already know. "What the hell." Jameslee@July25,2000 |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh boy James! Sometimes a little lady may surprise you ... you may just find yourself turned into the prey!  Great descriptions ... I do hope it all works out for you, and you get your hearts desire! I enjoyed this safari much!Best wishes, /Kit |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
James, you write from such an emotive threshold... this is a wonderful expression of feeling. Perhaps if you allow your "prey" to approach you upon occasion, she would feel perhaps less "hunted" and more willing to share ...? Good writing, my friend...I love your honesty. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
The thrill of the hunt, one is always moving faster than the other, it seems. Liked this! Corinne |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
jmlee12345, Very moving piece that you have wrote. I liked it, and that special someone will show up for you. How could they resist someone that writes like you do? |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
James, There is nothing like the hunt. Nice writing. You have captured those feelings well. I hope she comes around soon my friend. Hang in there!!  LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
It's so hard to slow down when you love so much and so deeply......great writing James~ |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
I love your imagery for this wonderful piece James. I know that once again you are sad, but as they say........you can lead a horse to water, but you can't make him drink. Your real true love does await you......I know she is somewhere. Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Since it feels like double posting........Take a hug too!!!!! Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley [This message has been edited by Marina (edited 07-25-2000).] |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Never give up the hunt friend...but maybe be just a bit more subtle...she is out there James. never say never |
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Holly Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 127Arkansas |
The thrill of the hunt is addictive, be careful. Seriously, this is wonderful expression and just overall, great work James! Hope your prey turns your heart to mush (in the best of ways).  love & all, -Holly I know well what I am fleeing from but not what I am in search of. Michel de Montaigne |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Kit, Claire, Corinne, Bill, Lone Wolf, Butterfly, Marina, Paula, and Holly for your warm responses. Marina I can feel your hug from a thousand miles. Sometimes the one you desire the most is the one that is the least available..I know that I must desire the one that desires me...I am working on that right now...I do have someone in mind...James |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
I am glad you can feel my hug and equally glad you have someone in mind who can see something in you I know has always been there. Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
James~ I really like this, I hope it works out. A change of pace may be just what you need...... -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Marina and Sea for lovely responses...James |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
you write from the heart..I love that ~~softly Maureen |
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monique Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 369Louisiana |
I don't want to be mean I just want to lighten up the situation Now James, what kind of animal (female) were you hunting? I hope I can make you smile monique |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Moonchild and Monique for the lovely comments.. Monique I am always up for a smile...I would like an Asian woman with plenty of time to share with me...and we will hike, scuba dive, swim, soak up some sun, touch and kiss, and smile forever...James |
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