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Mirrored to Me
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA 
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 Mirrored To Me In the mirror, you softly touch I see your eyes upon me there I'm bound to you by ties, desires Your grasp, I'm in, for you I care. Out of the blue of darkness, I Arrest myself, upon your mind Wanting, needs I seed in you When you awake, this too, shall find. You'll think of me, each moment when I shall appear, leaving traces of The treasures opened, possessed am I Clinging to some hopeful love. Strangely though, the feelings rise A fated moment comes into view A maiden lost in steel of eyes The mirror traps me, wanting you. It soon gives way to lustful looks That indigo vastness of the night Controlling hands that soothe to touch Capturing this soul in pure delight. You own me now in darkness, eyes Lighting of embers to spark, in wait Echoes each, the sharing of sighs Reflecting wants and needs to sate. ©MMoonchild Maureen Scully 2k [This message has been edited by MMoonchild (edited 07-30-2000).] |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
MMoonchild, I like this that you wrote, the more I read it, the more meanings came to me. Keep writing Maureen, this is great! |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
well Bill, I tried to post this early this afternoon...and I thought it might be me..but finally after taking a 3 hr break I was able to do so...thank you for all your support.. ~~soft hugs Maureen |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
A well crafted poem, a very enjoyable read as well as a very pretty picture. Gloom |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
ahh thank you kind sir..you made it just in time.. ~~soft smiles M |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
As beautiful and sensual as the woman in the picture is, she pales beside your lovely words. Fantastic Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Well Jamie..that is about the nicest thing anyone has ever typed to me.... thank you... thank you very very much ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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EWDrake Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 183NC, USA |
You never told me you had such great legs!!! Lovely lady, intriguing verse...he's a very lucky guy! *S* Evan |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
well great is in the eyes of the beholder I guess...they are short as I am short...sort of ~~softly smiling, Evan Maureen |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
This is much too good not to have a last chance to be seen. Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
JamieJamieJamie I thinks I luvs ya ~~soft smile Maureen |
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