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What We Have |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia 
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Come with me And play in the sand, Come with me See the beauty of this land. Look into the sky All clear and blue, Look into the sky, The colours so serene and true. Sit on the grass And talk with me, Sit on the grass, Tell me how our future's to be. Enjoy the rays of light in the coming day, Enjoy the rays of light Other people dont get see this way. Thank mother earth For what we have today, Thank mother earth For what she has passed our way. Be grateful for life In every form, Be grateful for life When we sit and talk at dawn. Know that we are blessed For the things we take for granted, Know that we are blessed For all things enchanted. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
What we have here is an excellent poem. . . one that reminds us all of what we have here on this planet and that we should be thankful for it every day!! Wonderful poem!! ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
well said, Sven ... a great little reminder, Beth ... a beautiful piece ... |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
I didnt realize this was here! i would have kicked myself if i missed it! this would now be my favourite of yours by far! fantastic tribute to Her......very lovely indeed! |
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beowulf_26 Member
since 1999-06-29
Posts 183 |
simply beautiful. |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
~Sven, Thankyou so much my friend. I appreciate the time you took to read this poem~ ~MA Miller, Sven took the words out of your mouth didnt he? (lol)...Happens to me all the time. Thankyou dearly~ ~Dawn, I knew you would love this one..Thanks a bunch 99~ ~beowulf_26, Thankyou greatly. Im glad you liked it~ |
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dreamy_eyes Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 67 |
Beth why isn't this poem up for the book? It would have got my vote! Fantastic poem! I'd like to say thank you for reply to my poem NO GOD. You were the only one who didn't try and make me believe. Thanx L  ve Deb |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Beth, Another poem from your heart that is so well written, and very meaningful. See you again. Bill..... |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
~Debbie, Ah it's not quite good enough for the book but thankyou indeed~ ~Bill my friend, Thankyou so much. I know we will meet again~ |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Very good,,,,so many thoughts...I liked this a lot!!! Very good poem....  Julie :) |
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