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T McCoy Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 186
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lies I still remember being 3 years old I still remember the stories you told I still remember everywhere we went I still remember all the love you lent But... -chorus- I'll never speak to you again I'll never speak to you again I'll never speak to you again-gain-gain I'll never speak to you again I still remember being 8 years old Dad got married and I got a new home I rolled right along to a brand new tune Never forgetting how much I missed you But... (chorus) 2 decades later and now I can see All the BS and lies you've been throwing at me I defended you with passion to my mother and wife For 28 years you've been part of my life But...(chorus) CONTROLLING CONNIVING YOU WASTED MY TIME YOUR LIES ARE LIKE ARROWS THEY'RE STUCK IN MY MIND DECEITFUL DISHONEST YOU'LL SIT ALONE CRYING BUT YOUR LIES DUG YOUR HOLE NOW YOU'RE PLANNING ON LYING YOUR WAY OUT OF THIS ONE BUT YOU'RE WAY OUT OF TIME I'M WAY OUT OF PATIENCE AND I'M THROUGH WITH YOUR LIES (chorus) |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
I can relate to this ... need any help with the tune? |
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T McCoy Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 186 |
I've kinda hummed up a good one... Got the guitar and drums... You wanna play bass? |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
My feet are tapping and my body swaying...I can HEAR this in my head...GREAT never say never |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Well I can't sing that's for darn sure.....but I've always wanted to play drums  Alot of pain and alot of venting in this one.....we all need a safe place to do that.....glad you found it here! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I'll take percussion and back up vocals...let's jam! and I like the way you expressed yourself...grinning an evil grin... |
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Gossamerwings Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 207 |
I love the way you vent. Great letting it out and it will make it easier to let it go. Hang in there!  Gossamerwings ;) |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
T Mckoy.. I can almost hear the melody in my mind  I love the way you express yourself. I can definately relate to the feelings you exppressed. rosepetals25 |
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Angel Sighs And Smiles Junior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 16 |
I totally got into every verse! Complete understanding in this writing. Kick A*# and take names later - that's my motto! Way to express! I have read several of your writings and I love the way that they go through every emotion. You are a fantastic writer! Keep it up! [This message has been edited by Angel Sighs And Smiles (edited 08-02-2000).] |
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