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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2000-07-29 09:15 PM


My cockalorum blast

I sat on Eldorado's rim
Toasting alliterations past.
Rhapsodizing foolish whim
Crowing a cockalorum blast.

I drank until irrelevant dawn
Above and beyond abilities
Then let out a final yawn.
And ran for the facilities

Idiocy crashed the shore
My bladder suffered pleurisy.
Then upchuck came and hit the floor
The payment of insanity.

Purgatory rest my bones
Hell and brimstone was the lieu
And I moaned deep undertones.
As hell came slowly into view.

Please I swore dear God I swore
Forgive this once don't close the door.


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Balladeer
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1 posted 2000-07-29 09:34 PM


Upchucking and out-of-control bladders...Sy, you certainly are waxing poetic tonight  ....and I like it!
Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2000-07-29 11:12 PM


Balladeer,
Every dog has his day. Thanks for the read.

Elizabeth Santos
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3 posted 2000-07-29 11:31 PM


What happened to all those romantic poems. I have always said, there is no subject that you don't write about with eloquence,
Even if it's not romantic, I still liked it
Liz

Nan
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4 posted 2000-07-30 07:51 AM


Sy... I can't believe I'm sitting here envisioning you upchucking all over the place.. and enjoying the sight.... Tooooooooo funny, my friend...
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5 posted 2000-07-30 08:14 AM


just a minute, Sy, and I'll have the AlkaSeltzer ready...followed by a large Bloody Mary for a little hair of the dog that bit ye!

Karilea

~~~ Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow.
Helen Keller ~~~

When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2000-07-30 09:40 AM


My true friend have all come to my rescue.
I love you all and promise I won't do it again.

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