Open Poetry #8 |
Black Velvet Night |
BSC
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Posts 2919New York, USA |
In the stillness of the twilight, A cicada sings his song, Bullfrogs join the chorus, At the start of the night so long. Across the steeled waters, Atop the mountains crest, The sun is but a sliver, As it lays itself to rest. Sitting on the shoreline, At the end of the weathered dock, I can hear the barn owls hooting; In the distance, a chiming clock. Darkness slithers silently, As a mist forms over the bay, The moon is now on center stage; Act 1 of the nighttime play. I can hear the cattails applauding, Anticipation's in the air, As the first of many fireflies, Dance with stylish flair. Nature at its finest, On this black velvet night, Echoes of her orchestra, Gone with the sun's first light. [This message has been edited by BSC (edited 07-23-2000).] |
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Gossamerwings Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 207 |
Such a lovely evening you paint. Wish I was there! Thank you! Gossamerwings ;) |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
LOVELY...reminds me of many nights spent with family on our old farm just sitting under the stars never say never |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
I can hear the cattails applauding Anticipation is in the air, As the first of many fireflies, Start dancing with stylish flair. LOVED THIS!!!!What more can I say... ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Beautiful evening ... may we join you on the dock ? |
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BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Gossamerwings, Paula & Mmoonchild, Thanks so much for your kind replies. Rex - Room for several on that dock.... Bonnie |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Oh yes a wonderfully descriptive account of sitting on the dock of the bay...James |
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L Tiuch Member
since 2000-02-04
Posts 151NY |
This is wonderful...can see myself on the dock with you. Great images! |
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Elizabeth
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since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
I can tell you're a sunset person, Bonnie. I have enjoyed every single one of your poems so far! Elizabeth I'm grabbing my hat and coat I'm leaving the cat a note Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town! |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is so very beautiful, Bonnie! Thanks for sharing your beautiful night! Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Bonnie~ Another beauty ! Takes me right to the dock to enjoy the view of your 'Black Velvet Night.' Wonderful ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
James, thanks for your kind reply. Linda, you probably were!!! Elizabeth, I am definitely a sunset person, thank you for your kind words. Denise, thank you for reading and replying. Marge, thanks, it's my favorite place to be. Thank you all, I truly appreciate your kind replies. Bonnie |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bonnie--this is absolutely beautiful...your images put me there...thank you. |
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monte Junior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 33 |
This takes me back to Lake Hiram, a very special part of my childhood. Thanks for reminding me... |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
~Hey, Im thinking the same as Rex. Sounds perfect~ |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautiful, Bonnie! The sights, sounds and images come through so vividly in this lovely verse ... thank you for taking me to this peaceful place! Best wishes, /Kit |
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