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Adrift in this Love
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Adrift in this Love |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Adrift in this Love It is plain to see where you should be On a boat a drift at sea with me Dolphins swimming around Only a sea breeze of a sound Sipping tropical drinks with fruit Just tanning without your bathing suit I'll rub you with sun tan lotion Stroking by the waves of motion Only the sea you and me Soft music to set us free Cuddling at night when it's cold Adrift in this love till we grow old [This message has been edited by insect (edited 07-30-2000).] |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Awwww  This is a sweet poem. I like it rosepetals25 |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
rosepetals25…Thank you for responding! I am happy you liked this poem and thanks for the smiles. Here is some for you. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
A drift in your words, I see beautiful, romantic words unfold. Very lovely Insect ... nicely penned! Best wishes, /Kit |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Kit McCallum…Thank you Shall we sail away with no direction to whichever way our pens may lead. This is for you Kit. Your Ocean The sea is a big place In its waters I see your face You are an ocean of grace I weave these sails with a silk lace The wind blows my thoughts to this pen As I float through oceans again and again These oceans full of life swim in you Your ocean is the hand of all that's true So true that life will sing A life of songs of everything Everything sings in the waves of motion The motion of this pen in your ocean |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Enjoyed this piece, insect, ditto the other comments. One note..."a drift" should be all one word "adrift" which means "drifting" whereas "a drift" is referring to an object named "drift". See what I mean? Again, enjoyed this... jwesley |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
jwesley…Thanks for liking my poem! Thanks for your reply! Just a note to show you care Thanks my friend for this time to share Reading poems and taking the time To respond to poets for their rhyme Rhymes of passion and rhymes so sad Responding makes the poet feel glad All the poets give thanks to you A caring poet makes a poet true Thank you |
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