Open Poetry #8 |
The Choice |
Rodney Belcher Member
since 2000-06-06
Posts 227Taylor, Michigan |
An unborn yet beating heart, yearning to live Asked not to be created, but with love to give Snuffed out in a second’s time, forever gone Punished for a crime of passion, a helpless pawn A mother-not-to-be because of a choice That most would not have courage to voice Forever living with the pain of unknown All the “what ifs?,” the seed is sown A politician, of whose concern is none Except for the elections to be won Rhetoric about morals and responsibility When the right belongs to you and me Standing before the final judge in the end Right or wrong and choices to defend The “righteous” and the unborn will have no say But the one who felt the pain will have her day Love one another-let God do the worrying, Rodney |
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beowulf_26 Member
since 1999-06-29
Posts 183 |
You captured the serious tone of such a topic wonderfully and in a few stanzas painted a more global picture. Very nice. Opinions are like bellybuttons: eveybody's got 'em and they're good for nothing. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Rodney, Good thoughts, good words, good poem. |
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Rodney Belcher Member
since 2000-06-06
Posts 227Taylor, Michigan |
Thanks for the words of praise...I just love the encouragement you all provide on this forum Love one another-let God do the worrying, Rodney |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Highly controversial topic, you are brave to take it on at this juncture. If you are American, you know what battles may lie ahead on the subject of abortion. Bush's running mate is very well known for his stand, he voted against it even in cases of incest, rape, and when a woman's life is at risk. The current laws have been in place since the 70's, and it will be interesting to watch the future unfold You've captured an angle of this subject very well. I don't usually expound to this extent, but...what the heck. Peace. Corinne |
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Rodney Belcher Member
since 2000-06-06
Posts 227Taylor, Michigan |
Thank you Corinne and excellent reading of my piece. I am personally opposed to the act unless it is to save the mother's life...but it is NO ONES business except for the mother...I often wonder if women were in charge and they decided that it was morally adventageous to castrate men after the age of 25 if these self-rightous pols would be willing to let the government make personal health decisions for them. I also find it funny that the same pols that oppose abortion are more than willing to put an adult to death in the electric chair...just when does a life stop being sacred?...when that unwanted child takes another's life? Love one another-let God do the worrying, Rodney |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Rodney...what an amazing coincedence...you and I both posting works on this subject...mine is called " Always Other Choices" so even our titles are close. I think abortion is not the answer, but i would never dream of forcing my belief on others. never say never |
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Rodney Belcher Member
since 2000-06-06
Posts 227Taylor, Michigan |
Amen Paula...why impose our beliefs on others?...they have to stand in judgement for their actions...we are responsible only to the extent that we can give advice if asked. Love one another-let God do the worrying, Rodney |
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