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| Open Poetry #8 |
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Masquerade |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia 
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Music leaps wildly 'round Impassioned dancers breathe the sound Of enchanted melody's seductive plea Tempting tainted debauchery Twisted bodies swirling parade Hide their faces in masquerade Flowing robes like glittered breeze With heaving bosoms glistened tease Eyes that beckon behind a mask With distorted smiles and painted laughs Merryment disguising sin Of countless embraces of lustful whim Perfumed advances, eleborate displays Of anonymous partakers in heated charade. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Princess, this is lovely! Have you just listened to the opera or have you recently seen Phantom? for you have captured the feel so well! Thank you! Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
hahaha....actually Sunshine...i was listening to Beethoven! thanks for enjoying! |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
WOW princess, a wonderfully written piece and a scene I have witnessed my times throughout my life as a student. Excellent images. "A frog, it cannot comprehend the sea Nor me happiness" Paul Draper-Mansun |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
Brian: i must say that im always pleased at the time you take to read and respond to my work. i do read your poems but often find that they are beyond my comprehension, therefore i fail to respond to them. i do hold you in high esteem and would appreciate learning more about your poetry (when and if you get the time)...Thanks! |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
 ~As always a wonderfull piece Dawn. Inspiration can found in the last place you look eh...lol. You wrote this so flowingly.I loved it!!~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Beethoven?? COOL!!! This is excellent poutprincess!! This could have been Beethoven's 7th. . . or the frenzy of the Hammerklavier sonata. . . Superb. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
Beth--you always find a way to make me feel good! thank you Ree! Sven--ah, you are a Beethoven fan! it was Symphony No. 6! Thank you for reading and enjoying! |
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