navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #8 » Summer Rain
Open Poetry #8
Post A Reply Post New Topic Summer Rain Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
BamaPoet
Junior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 34
Dothan, AL USA

0 posted 2000-07-30 12:14 PM


The peaceful summer rain falls gently upon my face,
washing away all worries and problems
life has bestowed upon me.
It allows me to see clearly once again,
and I see the world with new vision.

I see the beginning of so many beautiful things...
the tender shoots of green grass,
drinking in the raindrops greedily,
as it slowly falls upon each blade.
The multitude of wildflowers,
as they seemingly turn their blooms skyward,
to gratefully drink of every drop.

I see the most beautiful thing of all...
you and I together, walking hand in hand
in these tears from Heaven,
as they bathe us in all their glory.

I turn to look at you,
and I see unconditional love.
As I look deep into your eyes,
I experience such a rush of emotions.

The cool evening rain is exhilarating,
especially when combined with the tender love
from within your heart.

I will forever relive this moment,
always remembering the beauty I have seen before me.
Our love is like the bloom fo the newborn flower,
becoming more beautiful as it continues to grow
with each passing day.


© Copyright 2000 Mark Childre - All Rights Reserved
ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
1 posted 2000-07-30 12:27 PM


Beautiful romantic poem!.... flows right from the heart...welcome to Passions
BamaPoet
Junior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 34
Dothan, AL USA
2 posted 2000-07-30 12:32 PM


Thanks, I have always believed the best poetry comes from the heart. Thanks again for the comment.
Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #8 » Summer Rain

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary