Open Poetry #8 |
Summer Rain |
BamaPoet Junior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 34Dothan, AL USA |
The peaceful summer rain falls gently upon my face, washing away all worries and problems life has bestowed upon me. It allows me to see clearly once again, and I see the world with new vision. I see the beginning of so many beautiful things... the tender shoots of green grass, drinking in the raindrops greedily, as it slowly falls upon each blade. The multitude of wildflowers, as they seemingly turn their blooms skyward, to gratefully drink of every drop. I see the most beautiful thing of all... you and I together, walking hand in hand in these tears from Heaven, as they bathe us in all their glory. I turn to look at you, and I see unconditional love. As I look deep into your eyes, I experience such a rush of emotions. The cool evening rain is exhilarating, especially when combined with the tender love from within your heart. I will forever relive this moment, always remembering the beauty I have seen before me. Our love is like the bloom fo the newborn flower, becoming more beautiful as it continues to grow with each passing day. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful romantic poem!.... flows right from the heart...welcome to Passions |
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BamaPoet Junior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 34Dothan, AL USA |
Thanks, I have always believed the best poetry comes from the heart. Thanks again for the comment. |
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