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Open Poetry #8

More Than A Peach...

Vaporous One
Junior Member

since 2000-07-27

Posts 35

0 posted 2000-07-29 11:51 AM

sitting here
eating this peach,
and thinking of you...

noticing how the
sweet nectar reminds me
of your love

savoring this delicious,
utterly remarkable piece of work...
juice running down my chin;
lost in this moment
of sensation overload...

pure ecstasy...

funny how some things
remind me
of you...

beowulf_26
Member

since 1999-06-29

Posts 183

1 posted 2000-07-29 02:17 PM

very sweet. Great images.

Opinions are like bellybuttons: eveybody's got 'em and they're good for nothing.

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2000-07-29 02:17 PM

Just came in from picking peaches and what do I find before me...thoughts of you!

Well done!

Sunny

~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow.
Helen Keller ~~~

When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ

Vaporous One
Junior Member

since 2000-07-27

Posts 35

3 posted 2000-07-29 07:42 PM

Thanks guys, your comments mean a lot.

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2000-07-29 08:00 PM

VaporousOne~
What a delicious thought !
Just peachy !
Gives me that warm and 'fuzzy' feeling.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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BamaPoet
Junior Member

since 2000-07-30

Posts 34
Dothan, AL USA

5 posted 2000-07-30 12:39 PM

Mmmmm, beautifully written Vaporousone! Yes it's odd how even the slightest things can remind you of someone. Believe me, I KNOW the feeling! Sometimes even the simplest things can take me back to a special place or a special person, and I'm in Paradise again, if only in my mind.

EWDrake
Member

since 2000-07-30

Posts 183
NC, USA

6 posted 2000-07-30 02:31 PM

Intriguing imagery! Isn't it amazing, fall in love and then wander around waiting on something to trigger a drool factor...a little bit of Pavlov in each and all. *S*

Nicely done,

EWDrake

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

7 posted 2000-07-30 03:18 PM

some very sensual imagery here...enjoyed it much...now excuse me, while I peel this here banana...

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