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Depths Of You
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Depths Of You |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho 
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And still there are depths of you yet to be discovered in our succulent savory hours of intimacy and pleasure. Our lovemaking has never grown insipid, with always a new fantasy creeping round, and a new craving sprouting up; no thorn has ever jabbed through our coverlets of down; through decades of time we are never the same; after all this time, we continue to be each others’ best voyagers; nothing ever has had the chance to become threadbare; my beloved husband, my lover, the most unique to me; my heart’s tender dale, my companion, sweetest mystery; I love all the wandering corridors of your shifting motley emotions and the velvet tongued fire-lit museums of your mind; I love your lively underground meandering streams of stark feelings flowing; and the fragrant woodland campfires of our passions’ blaze. I love who you are deep inside. I love you. [This message has been edited by Rosemary J. Gwaltney (edited 07-29-2000).] |
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Toddles Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 396New Orleans, Louisiana |
Rosemary, Let me be one of the first to say "Excellent poem, flows well!" |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
welcome back dear lady!!!!! this is a wonderful declaration of your love and it seems some of luckys presentation is rubbing off on you (LITTERALLY by the content of this poem) LOL  perfect RM. glad to see your name back in these busy halls take care jm There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Such a gentle longing, desire, passion, appreciation for all that Love has to offer...James |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Rosemary--The love you have takes so well to words description, words that come from that well spring that it inspires...you are lucky to be so completed...Hugs |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Rosemary~ So YOU ! 'I love all the wandering corridors of your shifting motley emotions and the velvet tongued fire-lit museums of your mind' Hmmmmmm ! Museums Of Dale ... Do they charge admission ?  Good to see your smiling face, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Gossamerwings Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 207 |
Wonderful description of true love.  ~~~I love your lively underground meandering streams of stark feelings flowing; and the fragrant woodland campfires of our passions’ blaze.I love who you are deep inside.I love you.~~~ Beautiful writing and expressions of feelings! Gossamerwings ;) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Oh but a "wow" does not suffice, but you know already how I feel about this one---in awe of your talent, and most desirous of such inspiration...I keep looking, Rosemary...grins to you...a lovely poet you are... |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Oh Rosey Magoo, you've done it again. I love it baby. Do you think you can write something about (((?))) next time..? HA..! lol... I love you dearly bubba... All my Love, Dale [This message has been edited by lucky (edited 07-30-2000).] |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Rosemary wonderful poem to your dearest Dale very loving and tender pieceTracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Oh, how I've missed Rosemary's descriptive passages ,leading us naked through cool mountain streams, into an enticing drizzling shower, and now between the transparent sheets of ecstasy. This is vertual reality, my friends, of close encounters of the poetic kind. Very well written, my dear. I think it deserves another read.(Or am I just being nosey? Liz |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
Toddles, Janet Marie, jmlee 12345, Martie, Marge, Gossamerwings, serenity, lucky, tracie66, and Elizabeth Santos - thank you all so much for your kind comments, and appreciation! I appreciate them more than I can say! I always keep them, and treasure them. You warm my heart! (And, lucky - Dale, a special thanks to you - my dearest love, and inspiration.) The spiritual wind that holds survivors aloft, plants the seeds from which bloom new hope ... R.J.G. |
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EWDrake Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 183NC, USA |
Beautifully clear images, Rosemary, such a heartfelt tribute that one almost feels voyueristic daring to read it ~~ then reads it again nonetheless! EWDrake |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
love all the wandering corridors of your shifting motley emotions and the velvet tongued fire-lit museums of your mind; I love your lively underground meandering streams of stark feelings flowing; and the fragrant woodland campfires of our passions’ blaze. WOW Rosemary, a beautiful poem. really beautiful. "I am melancholy, flower cutting through stone" manic street preachers |
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