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lucky
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since 2000-01-17
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0 posted 2000-07-29 04:11 AM


every time

I watched the sun setting delicate
yonder I longed to share
my time with
you



[This message has been edited by lucky (edited 07-30-2000).]
© Copyright 2000 Dale W. Gwaltney - All Rights Reserved
tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
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Australia
1 posted 2000-07-29 06:19 AM


Lucky~
Lovely writings producing lovely images
Once again you've penned treasured moments well  
Love Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


brian madden
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since 2000-05-06
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ireland
2 posted 2000-07-29 09:28 AM


Lucky wonderful poem

"A frog, it cannot comprehend the sea Nor me happiness" Paul Draper-Mansun

Martie
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3 posted 2000-07-29 09:38 AM


Dale--this is just so beautiful and full of love....hugs to you and RG
beowulf_26
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4 posted 2000-07-29 11:47 AM


wonderful.  I especially liked

"every time I walked naked on
the oceans sand of ‘ol I yearned to
explore the seas in you every"

nice job.

Meadowmuse
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since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263

5 posted 2000-07-29 01:06 PM


Very tender, sweet, reassuring.

~ Claire

Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau


Gossamerwings
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since 2000-07-18
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6 posted 2000-07-29 04:01 PM


Sweetly rendered. I love it!!!  

* ya know, we all need to see more of you and Rosemary around here*  


Gossamerwings ;)

Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 997
northern mountains, Idaho
7 posted 2000-07-29 08:30 PM


Oh, my sweetheart, this poem is so tenderly beautiful!  I love it to pieces!  Your heart is so deep and your love so gentle.



Marge Tindal
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8 posted 2000-07-29 11:49 PM


LuckyDale~
I've visited your 'museum' ....
Was slightly overcharged ! LOL !

This is so puuuuuuurrrrrrttttttyyyyyy !
You just keep on writing the beauties
that I love to read.

Been wondering where ya' been, my friend.
Such refreshing thoughts from your pen
keep us happy ...
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


lucky
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since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601
Idaho
9 posted 2000-07-30 01:31 AM


Well of all the things... I thank you...

tracie66

brian madden

Martie..... I'll have an email off to you soon, love ya.

beowolf

Meadowmuse

Gossamerwings

Rosemary J. Gwaltney

Marge................ I'll email you with an update soon, my head is still spinning with my little brothers death while we were gone on vacation.

     I thank you all so very much for your replies. Love poems are not seen that much. Honestly I don't write that many. There seems to be more grief in my life to write of than  of love. But maybe I could change...

lucky (Dale)


ethome
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
10 posted 2000-07-30 01:34 AM


Lucky I found this to be a beautiful read.
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