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bsquirrel
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0 posted 2000-07-29 04:00 PM


in L.A. the
     breasts are her face
   the
    fears are her
waist, the
      belonging is
             haste.
liposuction junction,
              what's yer function?
    yer taste?


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Gossamerwings
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since 2000-07-18
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1 posted 2000-07-29 04:04 PM


Yep, Sili-CONE valley, huh!
Good poem!


Gossamerwings ;)

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2000-07-29 07:17 PM


Exactly...it happens here in Honolulu too you know...they walk out of the doctors office and suddenly you don't see her face anymore...only a large set of breast walking towards you..actually appearing larger than her head in size and appearance....James
bsquirrel
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3 posted 2000-07-30 01:44 AM


Thanks, both of you. I wrote this poem because of a co-worker who suddenly decides, after watching Entertainment Tonight, she's going to get breast implants along with her roommate. This girl has back problems, mind you.   It's so sad, it's funny.

Mike

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