Open Poetry #8 |
cloud of confusion... |
JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
names without faces cloud my mind in a sea of people yet noone around in a world of confusion spinning 'round and 'round time stands still the clocks are striking 12 the air is thick around me as I swallow another pill i thought of you in the back of my mind wondering what YOU would do the chains that held me here are now rusted at the links you can't keep me in a glass cage if that is what you think i'm searching for my freedom you fear that i will find it i've been living in your kingdom but you i will outwit just stand there with that evil grin i know you think you've got me this is a game you will not win it is time I set ME free........ |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"the chains that held me here are now rusted at the links" It sounds like nothing can hold you back now JulieAnn! Really liked that visual above ... well done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi JulieAnn, Well this is really good, and I hope your freedom comes to you, thank you for sharing. Cerenity |
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