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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! 
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Wasn't sure if I should submit this or not then I thought what the heck.....Please enjoy a look into my soul.....  Longing to hold you Fearing to get to close Pushing you away While tearing off your clothes Are you afraid of me baby It's just a good time we're having I'm not looking for soulmate Don't try to act like I'm yours Don't act like this is a date I've made a few mistakes And I've been there before I'm laying out the stakes Before you walk through my door Just gotta have a lover Be my friend I'll be yours Don't go gettin' all girlie Don't go wanting more...... Did I feel you touching me? As I walked past? Did you think me and you Would truely last? Didn't mean to hurt You haven't known me long Didn't think you'd get uptight Now I must be moving on...... Haven't got time For relationship games Is there anyone that knows What I'm talking about? I won't take the blame For your broken ego Never made any promises baby I have no regrets.... But if your looking for a good time Don't lose my number...... We'll lay it on the line And make it feel like thunder.... Take it or leave it Makes no difference to me Tell me if you could handle it I just have to stay free.... Julie :) |
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T McCoy Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 186 |
Impecible timing! I reply to one and the next one's there. Yet sadly I don't think I can read any more of your work, i mean i like it...3 for 3...but ahhh....whatever. glad you showed us your soul! Tony the ones who don't do anything are always the ones who try to put you down - Henry Rollins |
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AniKay83 Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 388Missing Since 1999 |
Your soul or mine? I understand that...freedom. "Please remind me gently, please smile against my cheek. Moods are easily damaged, such things are often weak. Don't look at me like other girls, handle me with taste. I'm denim and sneakers, too! Not all pearls and lace." ~Dreamseeker~ AniKay83 "I'm sorry for telling u love was unnecessary... making u lose ur way. I'm sure I'll be as sad as u feel." ~Touch and Go |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Tony~~~Thank you for your kind reply....I am glad you enjoyed my poems but why no more reading????  Anyway, I'll have to check out some of yours soon!!! Thank you for the reply AniKay....I am glad someone understands.....My poetry sort of changes with my moods.....  Julie :) |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Well I am glad you decided to bare your soul. I particularly like this part. Haven't got time For relationship games Is there anyone that knows What I'm talking about? I won't take the blame For your broken ego Never made any promises baby I have no regrets.... honest and on the line from the beginning. Great read my friend. |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
you definitely opened up..this was a very honest write... nice going ~~soft hugs Maureen |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
JulieAnn, I do believe that this is the first poem of yours that I have read. I am very glad that I stopped by, as it told a story to me, of someone who just needs to be free. And, I plan on coming back to read more. |
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