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Your Titles,...In My Poem
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Your Titles,...In My Poem |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396
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~Hi there,...this poem contains 35 Titles from your poems...I just took a chunk and used them in order at the time they were on my screen. I know,...kinda lame.hehe. Title credits at the end of the poem. *Peace. Your Titles,...In My Poem Sifting Sand, searching for pieces of me, through crystal dust. Slowly gathering, In Due Time, I'll fill that pail. Then I'll lay my weary body, in the Glist'ning Grass. And in a Dream's Continuation, I step with tears in my eyes,to the Other Side. Simple Pleasures such as, the glitter in the clouds, make a half smile on my face, but You Stole My Heart. And You May Find This Humorous, but it was a China Doll Heart, that meant the world to me. Now, when I look into your eyes, your Darkness Glows. All those times I held you,like a Mother's Love. Now, in This Moment, I make An Offering to a Dear Friend,Jungle Mouth Jim. That's what I should call you. After all that animal-like behavior that you displayed. Here now I swim in the Aftermath, saying goodbye to the Missed Mist. I call to the winds to carry my message. I thought you were Bigger Than Life. Taking me riding On The Spirit Cosmos, by the million mile hill with the Rolling Rock. To a shore far away, with Passions' Sands of Evermore. Atleast that's what you always told. And Only For You, would I have done those things. Those Untitled events, that will remain that way. I only wanted you to Hold Me. Not just Somewhere, Someone, but right here and you. I longed to be Held In Your Arms. Once There Was a Man underneath the filth of you now. I Have Been Told By Him, that his water will boil in time. This he has proved true. He has no Mother, he needs love, but he needs to let me live in a peaceful Genesis Evermore. This Heartbreak you've caused, makes me feel like a Little Girl Lost. Swimming but drowning...and needing. And when the Curtain of Rain falls gently on top of the water I struggle in, I'll make my Wishes Three. I'll wish for all my Dreams of Tomorrow, and blow kisses to the wind when they come true. This girl inside,...you see,...She will survive. *~Thank you all for the words.....I hope that noone minds???...Anyway,Thank you to Martie,Rex A McCoy,Meadowmuse,Sunshine,Brian K,Dsnyder,Marge T,Prometheus,Mellissa H,Serenity,Ethome,Sudhir I,Dark Angel,H Arlequin,Wayoutwalt,Mark B,Kat,Julieann,Elizabeth S,Corazon,Marina,Jeffrey C,Janet Marie,Irish Rose,Lone Wolf,Jmlee.*Peace. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
an interesting twist on things. This was very creative, and I enjoyed it. Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau" |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
neat idea ... and you put it all together quite nicely  Rex}>{{{{o> [This message has been edited by Rex Allen McCoy (edited 06-27-2000).] |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
SpitFire~ this is so creative! Very very good! -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
~Spitfire~ You go girl! This is was unique and well written what a creative mind you have. I loved this Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very creative, SpitFire! Wow! That took alot of work to do that so well! Denise |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
WOW, you are good! How could anyone mind after reading this? All my love, Jeffrey |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Thank you all for reading. I know it is a bit strange,...but there is a story in there somewhere. Thanks again.....and to the folks whose titles I used. *Peace. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
SF, LOVED IT!!!!! Creative idea!! You know I do not mind at all. It's an honor to be included my friend!! LW Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility. --William Wordsworth |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
A wonderful idea Spitfire, really clever and a cool poem. really enjoyed it. "monuments put from pen to paper turns me into a gutless wonder" Manic street preachers |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
SpitFire~ Very, very good, my dear! I love this one! That really was very creative! Keep on wiriting!!! Love YA~ ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SpitFire~ Nothing lame about it ! Very creative and very nicely done.  Of course you KNOW you'll get at least 35 replies ! ! CLEVER ! LOL ! I love it ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
and Thank YOU...y'know, I've often thought there was a certain poetry to the titles as I scrolled down the page, and You just proved the point, you clever thing, you...well done... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
WAY COOL Spitfire.. this is great... very creative and imaginative... good idea--good work take care, jm you can say baby baby can I hold you tonite maybe if I said the right words at the right time you'd be mine baby can I hold you tonite Tracy C |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
heheh yu hknow i went lookin first for my name and when i saw it my eyes lit up but yuh the poem be so cool yuh my fave part is how you worked in untitled..that takes the cake i love it yuh and cake too |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Very creative as everyone has said. Loved it and I bow to your abilities to create such a work that flows with a handful of titles. No, I don't mind; as a matter of fact I am honored to be included in your title grabbing. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Now this is something to be envious about my friend. This is so creative and talented...great way you've put this together. I'm clapping right now Great work Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Excellent idea Spitfire! That cannot have been easy at all, and the flow was great ... beautifully composed, well done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This is a very cool idea...you are now officially a SweetFire...James |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
.gif) This was Excellent Spitfire!!! You have an amazing talent...and in order???!!!! WOW!! |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This is great....a good exercise for those that are 'blocked' too!!!  |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
very inventive, AND a great poem....love this girl |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Oh gosh, I'm sorry I didn't see this before...it's wonderful, clever and just so well done! Thanks for starting out by Sifting Sand. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Nice Work!!!!I enjoyed it a lot. |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Wow everyone,...goodness. Thank you for the replies to this odd little number. haha. I feel guilty bringing this back up here, but there are so many of you to thank. Really, each of you have made me smile. Thanks for reading. Take care. *Peace. |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Now this is great, I love it. God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Cool idea, I'll have to try something like this myself, it's very inventive and so well done . Loved it . L.of.L. Tom . Insanity is a perfectly normal responce to an abnormal world -R.D.Laing.- |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
This is so creative, what an excellent idea! You are fun my friend! Love your poems! I think it's catching on. I'd like to try this one day. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
wow..spitfire..this is too cool! you did a wonderful job putting all those titles in there and still making sense!! and you used the titles in order?? (i read that you did..) i'm a little late in my reading, but--i like it! i like it! dg "i speak in written word--my lips, no sound may utter..." dgvarner |
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N2Wishin Junior Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 38 |
Very Cool! |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
I read this before, but never commented. So here I am to say that this was a cool idea that I enjoyed reading! Elizabeth Why ME??? |
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Toddles Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 396New Orleans, Louisiana |
Very creative & a clever idea! |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Great job!!!!!! I know how hard it is to come up with a story out of those. I did the same thing for my 1000th post with my own titles and it wasn't easy! You did a fantastic! Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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