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The Fourth "R
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The Fourth "R |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA 
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The Fourth "R" I calculate the hours lost The minutes, seconds of The time spent missing that of you Spent gazing up above. The ceiling reels, spins, no control Replaying all I think. Yet warming deep within, is calm When thirsting thoughts, I drink. Feeling lips upon my own The heartbeat's pulsing pace Quickens every second pressed As we come face to face. Reality, the fourth of "R's" I'm learning new and find The kiss of you stays clinging to My body, soul, and mind. Feeling arms around my waist While mine reach up to you The tenderness of seeking eyes Each moment in your blue Fills the need, desired two Of sharing what's been missed My body, soul and mind cling to The memories of each time kissed. Feeling eyes upon me now Leaving imprints as they crawl Following every inhaled breath As bodies rise then fall. Our rhythms become synchronized Each moment "We" exist In gentle, flowing silent words I'm captured each time kissed.  MMoonchild 7*2k Maureen Scully [This message has been edited by MMoonchild (edited 07-28-2000).] |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
MMoonchild, You do have a wonderful descriptive way with words that you write. This is very well done and I enjoyed the read. Keep writing, keep writing like this. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Excellent poem with wonderful flow what more does a reader want... lots of heartfelt words... that completes it.... Maureen, enjoyed this muchly... btw, MiRRoRed MemoRies has 4 'R' s  regards, sudhir |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
thank you Bill...I woke up on the right side of the bed this morning I think.... ~softsmiles Maureen and it finally stopped raining here...*w..oh if you get a chance go to dark passions and check out The Drive By..I couldn't resist..it's about kissing also...*s [This message has been edited by MMoonchild (edited 07-28-2000).] |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Sudhir...you made me do a double take..as I have this poem I wrote....earlier Mirrored To Me  In the mirror, you softly touch I see your eyes upon me there I'm bound to you by ties, desires Your grasp, I'm in, for you I care. Out of the blue of darkness, I Arrest myself, upon your mind Wanting, needs I seed in you When you awake, this too, shall find. You'll think of me, each moment when I shall appear, leaving traces of The treasures opened, possessed am I Clinging to some hopeful love. Strangely though, the feelings rise A fated moment comes into view A maiden lost in steel of eyes The mirror traps me, wanting you. It soon gives way to lustful looks That indigo vastness of the night Controlling hands that soothe to touch Capturing this soul in pure delight. You own me now in darkness, eyes Lighting of embers to spark, in wait Echoes each, the sharing of sighs Reflecting wants and needs to sate. M 2k thank you for your sweet comments Maureen [This message has been edited by MMoonchild (edited 07-28-2000).] |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Maureen, This is wonderful, have you posted this in the forums already, if not do it right away... please... regards, sudhir |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Sudhir..I am fairly new here and have a repertoire of poems from this first year of writing..you would soon tire of them..but I will post this one for you...in this forum... thank you again ~~smiling Maureen |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
That's beautiful Maureen...I know you have such a kind and wonderful heart...it always shows in your work take care.....ethome.. |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
E....such a wonderful thing you say to me... *kotc..if I may be allowed... ~~smiling Maureen * shhhhhhh keep this a secret between just us ...ok? |
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