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Michael G
Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579
Nashville

0 posted 2000-07-29 05:16 PM


I'm thirty something
but I'm not some looser
I've still got my rythm
atill have my soul
thats one thing you cannot have
something you shall never control.
I'm thirty something
have been to see hell
been to where I thought
heaven took control
I'm not done yet
this world is too big.
I'm thrty something
with Bad Religion on my CD
getting dressed for their show
to get my heart out
to make a flow sing
to scream at my insanity!
I'm thirty something
living my dreams
controlled nightmares
keeping guard over me
and it's time to stand
be counted, our fall away.

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Marina
Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario
1 posted 2000-07-29 05:32 PM


Exactly when did you visit my life??  LOl

Great thought provoking poem Michael.  I enjoy your work.

Marina


It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen
Marina Crossley


Sunnyone
Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
2 posted 2000-07-29 06:55 PM


Michael...
         "I'm not done yet..."
    AMEN to that one!! Great poem here, and
    it's just how I believe...
         You're not dead until you quit!!!
              I loved this one!!



~~ To Live is to Give ~~


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