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Sudhir Iyer
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0 posted 2000-07-28 07:39 AM


Last weekend, I had been to The Netherlands and happened to visit the Rijksmuseum in Amsterdam... Shall I just say that it was captivating?

Karilea (Sunshine) suggested that I should write about the impression it created upon me and I did. Thanks Karilea for the push...

I hope you enjoy the read as much as I enjoyed being there  
-------------------- ~~~ --------------------
An Ode to the Ethereal

Reflections of light at their very best,
Not caused by sunrise or sunset hues -
But by a ray falling from a crown's crest,
Lending its shine upon objects of daily use.

The dropping light reflected as well -
Off surfaces of all of these articles;
W.C. Heda had them captured well,
Creating unity in unseen particles.

'Tis said that none else could render
Reflections just as perfectly as he;
Casting shadows of light asunder,
He'd brought hypnotic magic upon me.

I moved on in my foray of viewing art,
Realising the whale of a time I had there;
At the Rijksmuseum of Decorative Art,
Painting and Sculpture
- that was where.

Amongst many works that caught my eye;
It stood tall, Rembrandt's The Night Watch -
A lively portrayal of militiamen in action high,
Dramatically illuminated - a spectacle to watch.

Reluctantly, I turned to The Stone Bridge -
Another Rembrandt beauty with an eerie light;
A painting of a thunderstorm across the ridge,
Luminous spots in dark settings gave me a fright.

"Time to close", said the guard  in a voice so shrill,
"Five PM" whilst angry faces checked their clocks;
Time was short, to me it seemed to be shorter still,
But the memory of that time, in my mind - is locked.

Glorious paintings from extraordinary painters,
Bring out life's impressions in ways most surreal;
Leaving onlookers like me inspired to be writers!
Ah! But how could I avoid this ode to the ethereal!

~




[This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (edited 07-28-2000).]

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2000-07-28 08:01 AM


Sudhir~
Oh, and how your poetic light shines
on these lovely works of art.
Wonderful tribute.
~*Marge*~


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Elizabeth Santos
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2 posted 2000-07-28 08:03 AM


This is a wonderful tribute to Seymour , as both his painting and his poetry have ethereal qualities. You tour was very impressive, and enlightening. Thank you for this wonderful poem and tribute to an outstanding poet and artist
Very well written
Liz

Mark Bohannan
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3 posted 2000-07-28 08:19 AM


Absolutely wonderful....I do so love the way you write.  Great read my friend.  

* I actually lived in the Netherlands for 3 years and the beauty of that country takes me aback and your poem has pulled out those old memories.



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Sunnyone
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4 posted 2000-07-28 09:26 AM


Sudhir....
          You described the art so well
      that I felt as though I was actually
      gazing at it!!  Thank you for the
               journey......



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5 posted 2000-07-28 09:43 AM


Sudhir, you DID it, and you did it SO well!

Sunny

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Tess
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6 posted 2000-07-28 09:54 AM


You brought these works of art to life for me...as if l was there   Thanks!
Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2000-07-28 10:21 AM


Sudhir,
I thank you for all the painter here and elsewhere. Yes Rembrant was a master of light. Glad you enjoyed your visit to the museum. Sy

Sudhir Iyer
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8 posted 2000-07-28 10:52 AM


Marge, Thanks for such a lovely response...

Liz, What a wonderful compliment you have etched... thanks

Mark, as always you have been so appreciative... Thanks my friend

Sunny1, ... and I thank you for joining the journey...

Karilea, I am so glad that this came out nice... Thanks for your ethereal support

Tess, I am happy that you could 'see' them... Thanks

Seymour, I am content with the thought that this reached your eyes... Thanks.


Many regards to all,
sudhir

Corinne
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9 posted 2000-07-28 11:07 AM


You captured your impressions perfectly, Sudhir!

Corinne

Sudhir Iyer
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10 posted 2000-07-28 12:04 PM


Thanks Corinne, perfectly is a very generous word...  

regards,
sudhir

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ma miller
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11 posted 2000-07-28 12:24 PM


a well penned tribute this is, Sudhir ... the picture you paint ... nice

m.a.

Sudhir Iyer
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12 posted 2000-07-28 04:42 PM


m.a. (I wonder what your first name might be?)

Thanks for reading and also for your words of appreciation...

regards,
sudhir

ethome
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13 posted 2000-07-29 05:49 AM


Sudhir it sounds like you had a fabulous time. I can well imagine the beauty and your reluctance to leave. Thanks for sharing this ode it is well penned and lifelike.
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14 posted 2000-07-29 05:57 AM


Sudhir~
You paint pictures my friend, pictures in my mind   Thanks....you are a wonderful poet
Tracie~


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skysight
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15 posted 2000-07-29 06:18 AM


Oh, when words can only capture but a glimpse of what we mean...  

Because freedom always comes at a price to the soul...

brian madden
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16 posted 2000-07-29 08:32 AM


Sudhir, a picture paints a thousand words also a great poem can paint a thousand pictures. And your poetry could feel that Gallery a 100 times over. A beautiful piece, thank you for the tour.

"A frog, it cannot comprehend the sea Nor me happiness" Paul Draper-Mansun

Nan
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17 posted 2000-07-29 08:39 AM


Very nice, Sudhir... You make me want to break out my paints & easel.... It's very awe-inspiring to walk among such extraordinary talent from days goneby, isn't it???... Well said, my friend..
Kit McCallum
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18 posted 2000-07-30 08:14 AM


Oh Sudhir ... I just loved this verse!  You've taken me there with you in this picturesque journey through your pen. Thank you .... just beautiful!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Sudhir Iyer
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19 posted 2000-07-30 11:29 AM


ethome,
Thanks a bunch... particularly for "lifelike"...

tracie,
Thanks... wonderful is a huge compliment...

skysight,
seeing you for the first time here.. .WELCOME to passions.. I will soon get to your posts too... meanwhile thanks for dropping by

brian,
my friend, you are welcome to share the tour many times over... thanks for the huge...huge compliment that makes me a 100000 times happy  

Nan,
awe-inspiring it was... and the meories I carry with me will surely inspire me more and more... thanks for your lovely response...

Kit,
am I glad or am I glad to have taken you with me in the journey... thanks

regards to all,
sudhir

Titia Geertman
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20 posted 2001-11-28 02:40 PM


Hi Sudhir, this is quite a masterpeace you wrote here.

I know the museum very well and it was as if I saw all the beautiful things again through your eyes.

I enjoyed the reading very much so thank you for posting it here.

Titia

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