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Corinne
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0 posted 2000-07-27 10:24 PM




Harvesting

August days grow protracted,
As sapphire spreads wildfire
Crickets croon of noon heat,
Evenings thicken with ovulation.

It never completely cools off,
Perspiration upon our pillows
There will be no sleeping tonight,
Just grinning three a.m. faces.

Clothing sticks in dark patches -
Nylons designed to torment
Stripped off like kids’ stickers,
Scurrying into to fresh sheets.

Whispering so the children won’t wake
We speak of the season of apples,
Pumpkins with no time to carve
Rotting on the porch till winter.

Festival time in October
Plucking golden fruits,
Craving you after midnight
Harvest feast for lovers.

© 2000 Corinne Bailey



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Meadowmuse
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1 posted 2000-07-27 11:23 PM


Corinne, this is a delight! There has always been something so fiercely inspiring and exciting about the fall of the year, for me. I have to guard my heart extra carefully in the autumn.    Wonderful poem!

~ Claire

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2 posted 2000-07-27 11:45 PM


Oh, boy! Being a Missouri boy myself, I can picture this so clearly...even smell it in the air. Beautiful, Corinne.........
Sunnyone
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3 posted 2000-07-28 10:11 AM


Corinne...
          Fall is my favorite time of year,
   and this is a wonderful picture of it!!
              Beautiful work!



~~ To Live is to Give ~~


Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2000-07-28 10:33 AM


Corinne,
This was a delight to read.

Sudhir Iyer
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5 posted 2000-07-28 10:40 AM


Wonderful.... wonderful... pockets full of wonder...

regards to you Corinne,
Sudhir

Corinne
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6 posted 2000-07-28 11:04 AM


Thank you, Meadowmuse, it is my favorite time of year too, the colors are so intense, the sense of death before rebirth, and of course, all those great old scary movies on the telly!

Balladeer, yes, the scent of the apples, crispness in the air, leaves crunching beneath your feet, big old full moons...(and thank you,too).

Sunny, Seymour and Sudhir, thank you!

Corinne

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7 posted 2000-07-28 10:18 PM


Corinne~

What vividity !

'Evenings thicken with ovulation'

I can see the moon in all her
harvest glory ...
one line says it all !
Excellent, dear poet.
~*Marge*~


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Martie
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8 posted 2000-07-28 10:29 PM


There is so much flavor in this poem, you can almost taste it...wonderful!
Mark Bohannan
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9 posted 2000-07-28 10:39 PM


Absolutely beautiful.  I love the sound of the leaves under my feet and through this I find myself going back to my childhood days in Southern MO.  Thanks for taking me back.
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