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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii 
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I am real, for what real is worth. I can feel the heart beat of the earth. I have strived for life on my feet. I have given birth, layed my heart on fires hearth, and stretched my time on wings of mirth. And now I'm gentle, and now I'm round. < !signature--> Kindly, Redheart Angrybraids [This message has been edited by redheart angrybraids (edited 07-27-2000).] |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
this is the first of your work i have read and i like your style, RA (can i abreviate?) ... I can feel the heart beat of the earth. cool line ... My calling before me, let quill be my offering; For to be called poet, no greater gift to receive. M.A. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
this is not beyond me---I feel the connection through words, redheart... this is pure poetry. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LittleRedHeartAngryBraids~ This is so gentle and so YOU ! What joy is mine ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Bumping per Ron's instructions. Got lost in the Cere's hourglass of miscalculated time. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
perfect...once again ... you say it so very well with such wisdom and grace take care gentle poet jm There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
redheart angrybraids... I enjoyed the tenderness of this work. Very nice indeed.... ~~ To Live is to Give ~~ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
The purest of pure tenderness. Loved it.  |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii |
repeated mountains of gratitude, to all of your kind and gentle comments, MA- thank you for checking it out. serenity-as always it is a pleasure, thank you kindly. Marge-the flattery you bring, your words make me smile, thank you. jm-thank you so. sunny1-thank you, glad you liked. Mark-thank you. Kindly, Redheart Angrybraids |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This is the icing on the poetic cake... I love it much!!! |
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DiscordantNote New Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 9Texas |
Lovely. There is a simplicity and gentleness barely beneath the surface. Yes, round is a good analogy. "Things get complicated when you get past eighteen, and the further past eighteen you get... the more complicated they become". |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii |
thank yo again serentiy and thank you as well DisNote. Kindly, Redheart Angrybraids |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
You have written a very tender morsel...James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you are missed |
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