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Kitty**
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since 1999-07-27
Posts 428
Charlottesville,VA USA

0 posted 2000-07-27 08:33 AM





Just felt the need to repost this....

                    

Love is for teenagers, I've head it said,
And I believe this be true.
My feelings go much deeper then that,
The word 'love' for me, won't do.

For me, it was an awakening.
The knowledge, of what love is about.
Two people, forever 'bonded',
By trust and truth, with out doubt.

It is something, that "just is",
existing, deep within me.
It has no purpose, no reason,
It's something you can't even see.

It's a part of my living and breathing,
as tears appear when I cry.
Or laughter that surfaces when I'm happy,
Or the rebounding of a desolate sigh.

It is simply a part of me,
And over it, I have no control.
It's there… it exists…it lives,
Inside me, the same as my soul.

It stems from the core of my being,
Unleashed, allowed to be free.
Even you, cannot restrain it,
Though you may not, want it to be.

Acceptance, or rejection, you can not choose.
There are no options for you.
Somebody cares, beyond the word love,
Unconditional, unchanging and true.

That "just is' feeling, is there,
It's with me, wherever I go.
And you are the reason for it, my love,
and I just wanted you to know.

If you can't make it so,
you need to let it go!

© Copyright 2000 Kitty Sandridge - All Rights Reserved
amazon_lover
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since 2000-04-09
Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland
1 posted 2000-07-27 08:40 AM


Hi Kitty
Rightly said. Nice expression throughout.

Sincerely
A_L

Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733
Michigan
2 posted 2000-07-27 08:42 AM


This "just is".......AWESOME!  I really enjoyed the thoughts in this one...and the
feeling that I got when I read it...started off kind of sad for me.....then the rainbow in the end.  Great writing~

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
3 posted 2004-05-23 08:52 PM


that's precious
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