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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Travel On _____________________________ One may not reach the dawn save by the path of the night. - Kahlil Gibran - _____________________________ You cannot see the light my dear until the dark has made you fear until the day is so far away you cannot see the light. Until the dark has made you fear until the day is so far away you cannot see the light until a voice in dark you hear. Until the day is so far away you cannot see the light until a voice in dark you hear you cannot see the light quite near You cannot see the light until a voice in dark you hear you cannot see the light quite near save by the path of the night. Until a voice in dark you hear you cannot see the light quite near save by the path of the night ~ when wrong can suddenly be made right And now you've reached the dawn. ©Karilea Rilling Jungel 25 July 2000 Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
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Very true, Karilea!  Denise |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Karilea, Is what I see a mirage?  I can see a billboard saying to me things that are scrolling from down to up.... like the line "you cannot see the light" moved from 4th to 3rd to 2nd to 1st and then I saw the light line save by the path of the night ~ when wrong can suddenly be made right And now you've reached the dawn. (... well so did the other lines move...) Now I have reached the dawn... and the morning has come up now after the layers of early twilight, late twilight and dawn... Amazingly done and very well said... Your sun shines through ... regards, sudhir P.S. tell me it is not a mirage... I will just call it a Sunshine Effect |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I agree with sudhir here, this is deceptively simple...a clever arrangement, all in all...very effective, Sunshine... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
denise, thank you... Sudhir, I guess you could say it's like looking down a blacktarred road on a hot summer's day...mirage and all...glad you enjoyed this... Serenity, thank you for coming in to read... Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh my!!! You absolutely have to repost this!!! |
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