Open Poetry #8 |
Connection |
rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Two lost and wondering souls, Stumbling through space and time Discovering an eternal bond.. a connection They have been searching for their whole lives. Your soft breath on the curve of my neck, The gentle caress of your strong hands, The exquisite feel of your warm body Driving and grinding into to mine. As our souls mingle, becoming one In a rush of unimaginable pleasure. A connection… body, mind, and soul So much more than a feeling or an emotion. A love stronger than we could ever imagine Controlling us… guiding our souls through life Supplying us with an unbreakable strength And a happiness that only a rare few have known. |
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T McCoy Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 186 |
...and how lucky those few are... this was a very emotionally strong piece... ...and the enjoyable emotions, too! Tony the ones who don't do anything are always the ones who try to put you down - Henry Rollins |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
rosepetals25... Now that was very pleasurable reading!!!!!!! I think I'm going to be reading more of your work!!!! Very Nice...... ~~ To Live is to Give ~~ |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
rosepetals25, How descriptive, as I could almost feel as if it were me, in your poem. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Tony - Thank you. I agree.. those who find their connection are very lucky indeed. Sunny1 - Aww.. thank you. I'm glad you liked it |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Bill - I didn't forget to respond to you.. I hit a wrong button..lol. Thank you for your compliment. I admire your poetry so I'm glad you like some mine |
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Spirit2572 Junior Member
since 2000-07-29
Posts 15 |
I love this poem. I have my connection in my life and your poem couldn't have explained it better. Spirit2572 |
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