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rosepetals25
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0 posted 2000-07-27 12:02 PM


Two lost and wondering souls,
Stumbling through space and time
Discovering an eternal bond..  a  connection
They have been searching for their whole lives.
Your soft breath on the curve of my neck,
The gentle caress of your strong hands,
The exquisite feel of your warm body
Driving and grinding into to mine.
As our souls mingle, becoming one
In a rush of unimaginable pleasure.
A connection… body, mind, and soul
So much more than a feeling or an emotion.
A love stronger than we could ever imagine
Controlling us… guiding our souls through life
Supplying us with an unbreakable strength
And a happiness that only a rare few have known.



© Copyright 2000 Tara Baldridge - All Rights Reserved
T McCoy
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1 posted 2000-07-28 07:43 AM


...and how lucky those few are...
this was a very emotionally strong piece...
...and the enjoyable emotions, too!

Tony

the ones who don't do anything are always the ones who try to put you down - Henry Rollins

Sunnyone
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2 posted 2000-07-28 09:51 AM


rosepetals25...
             Now that was very pleasurable
       reading!!!!!!!  I think I'm going to
       be reading more of your work!!!!
                   Very Nice......



~~ To Live is to Give ~~


Bill Charles
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3 posted 2000-07-28 10:45 AM


rosepetals25,
How descriptive, as I could almost feel as if it were me, in your poem.

rosepetals25
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4 posted 2000-07-28 07:05 PM


Tony - Thank you.  I agree.. those who find their connection are very lucky indeed.  

Sunny1 - Aww.. thank you.  I'm glad you liked it  


rosepetals25
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5 posted 2000-07-28 07:08 PM


Bill - I didn't forget to respond to you.. I hit a wrong button..lol.  Thank you for your compliment. I admire your poetry so I'm glad you like some mine  
Spirit2572
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6 posted 2000-07-29 07:20 PM


I love this poem. I have my connection in my life and your poem couldn't have explained it better.

Spirit2572

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