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Corazon
Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209


0 posted 2000-07-26 02:31 PM


i know you didn’t ask
my friend
but i am doing ok
well
i am breathing
and my heart is still
beating and
able to bleed
again
that is
living isn’t it?
so i guess you were right
after all
i can
live
without you
i just didn’t want
to have to.


© Copyright 2000 zoe d. - All Rights Reserved
Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
1 posted 2000-07-26 03:12 PM


Ouch! the hurtful feeling, the hurt soul... tale of a bleeding heart... angst of the broken-hearted...

in short, well written...

Corazon ~
Many regards,
sudhir

ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
2 posted 2000-07-26 03:18 PM


A lot said here in just a few lines and I can feel the hurt in the words so clearly.
Those old separation blues they come a callin and they are'nt easy to shake......

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
3 posted 2004-05-23 09:46 PM


I know this well
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