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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho 
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If I could stain this page it would be a charcoal gray and it’s blemish would hide my dawns squalid past it would cover the stage of broken dreams and things felt were surely meant to pass thought thoughts on shades of gray which always clouded daz and by no means ever flew away to soon but poised betwixt a darkened phaze laid midst a nexus just a toasted dusty lyric stashed away on haggard shelves half frozen left behind on sloped windswept prospects where thymes and drafts reached to touch the longing sky O yes well beyond the range of tomorrow where poets are sure to die no one ever cared for truth nor innocent eyes tears of youth or even wasted years left behind only the faded slow from a shameless life and to jot another truly shrouded line jaded [This message has been edited by lucky (edited 07-25-2000).] |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
That was cleary intense and so well written. Thanks for sharing. Sauni Sauni :) Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps |
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Gossamerwings Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 207 |
I love the way you speak.Thanks for the great read! Gossamerwings ;) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I can close my eyes and still see the words...lol..you did it, lucky!!! and with such style and grace too... |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
Haunting, always with so much emotion tucked into your own uniquely mysterious style, my sweetheart, and such exquisite visual effects! Your work is always special to me. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Lucky~ My buddy you write with such style of your own and I just marvel at the way you express yourself...great work  Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi Lucky...You always inspire me with your words that flow from somewhere deep where I reach to understand and feel. |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Saunni it was cleary intense and so well written I was biting my fingernails the whole time. Thanks for replying. I was however impressed with your statement... “Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps.” as we had just returned from two weeks vacation and I had a phone message from dad... My brother had died, I was thinking on it when I wrote this. Thank you. Gossamerwings Thank you so much for the kind remarks. serenity If you close your eyes and still see words you may have some kind of disorder I hope you don’t see html’s...lol..you did it, lucky!!! You have style and grace of your own too... thank you Rosemary J. Gwaltney It is you my dear who are haunting and mysterious, tracie66 Thank you tracie Martie It’s good to be an inspiration. Looks like we’re both a little deep. Thanks for your understanding. I’m still working on that letter for you... sorry about the delay. My head is jumbled with the loss of my brother. I’ll get it to you soon. Sending love and prayers Thank You for your understanding. lucky... Sometimes |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wonderful! |
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