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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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(I can't believe it's 500!) How do I say I'm sorry... for all the stupid things I've done? How do I make you realize that you're the only one? When I look at you, I see the pain I've made you bear.. I never knew it then, but now I know how much you care.... How could I have been so blind that I didn't want to see.. A heart so trusting and so kind and you gave it all to me.. Your soft blue eyes are filled with love, There's nothing hidden there.. You wrapped your love around me You kept me warm and free from care.... I guess they're right... there's none so blind as those who will not see.. And when I thought I was all alone.. You were standing next to me... It must have been real hard to love enough to let me go,, After all these years and a million tears.. I just wanted you to know......... You will always be my joy, You're an angel in disguise.. You've been there, through thick and thin.. Through black and stormy skies.. But now the sun is shining bright, and the road is clear ahead.. I will be your love tonight, The rest is better left unsaid! Love received is equal to love given! |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
a very good expression to your lover.when something is not obvious it'll require silent understanding and understanding can be there only if there's clarity and clarity can be there only if there is clear and effective communication between two hearts.. Sincerely A_L |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
A_L..... Yes, you're very right..communication can make or break any relationship... Thank you so much for reading this! Love received is equal to love given! |
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Gossamerwings Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 207 |
If your poems are a song of your life You are up and down the scale I wish for you peace and contentment That leaky boat you no longer have to bail. Excuse me for trying to rhyme Its all that I can say I have been up all night and this has been a bad day. *bad rhyme too*  Hang in there, girl!  Great poem! Gossamerwings ;) |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi Sunny, This is great. You write poems one after the other and they are all great. Geez, maybe someday I will also. Hope that I haven't missed any of yours, as I enjoy your thoughts as you put it into verse. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Gossamerwings.... Oh, I liked your verse!! Thank you so much for liking mine... Hi Bill.... Thank you so much for your reply, and I'm glad I can touch you with my words..........I think your work is fantastic, my friend...and I read all that I can find!!! Keep it up, as we feed each other!! Love received is equal to love given! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Sunny1...congrats on the 500...and such a sad wonderful work to celebrate it with. never say never |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Paula.... Thank you, and I see that you picked up on the 'bittersweet' feeling here! Love received is equal to love given! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I guess they're right... there's none so blind as those who will not see.. And when I thought I was all alone.. You were standing next to me... It must have been real hard to love enough to let me go,, After all these years and a million tears.. I just wanted you to know......... Very powerful and intense words. Lovely read.  |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Mark..... This whole thing just kind of fell onto the paper! I guess I've got a 'spur of the moment' type of muse!! Glad you liked it!!! Love received is equal to love given! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very heartfelt |
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