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Corinne
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0 posted 2000-07-26 11:24 AM





Untitled

Painting between the leaded slivers
Reflections of orange poppies’ glow
Patient hands of the performer
Ancient art breathing sand to life.

Red heat replies on face and hands
Intensifying sea green eyes
Glowing with mounting intensity,
Applause from this crowd of one.

Crystals tinkling in beach breeze,
Spirals shape songs in octaves
Cattails mixing casually
With spiky clusters of triangles.

He cares not who will procure
It’s the artistry he lives for
To be held in sculpting hands
Would surely mean passion.

© 2000 Corinne Bailey


© Copyright 2000 Corinne - All Rights Reserved
Sudhir Iyer
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1 posted 2000-07-26 11:33 AM


Great work, Corinne... sheer delightful poetry...

Wonderful... want to call it something... a title? maybe you could call it "A Painter's Passion"

regards,
sudhir

ethome
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2 posted 2000-07-26 11:38 AM


Tough one alright...I think I'd just call it The Artist..that may be to simple ... don't know..only know it is very well written and I enjoyed the read......ethome..
Elizabeth Santos
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3 posted 2000-07-26 11:39 AM


LOvely clear and corful visions, but I don't have a name.
Excellent piece
Liz

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4 posted 2000-07-26 12:10 PM


Glass Blown?

Breathing Passion...???

Forging Crystal Dreams ???

Something like that maybe Cor?  Interesting subject..

Parker
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5 posted 2000-07-26 12:40 PM


Very Very lovely Corinne. How about Glass Passions or Sculpting Passsion.
Breathing Sand
Sculpting Hands...

What ever its a wonderful piece.

Park

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6 posted 2000-07-26 01:29 PM


Incredible, and I did enjoy...and it is a tough one...Full Blown Passion maybe...nah...I love your work...thanks for sharing...
ma miller
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7 posted 2000-07-26 01:37 PM


nice piece Corinne ...

"Stained Glass Passions"

Corinne
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8 posted 2000-07-26 03:45 PM


Thank you for your comments and suggestions, Sudhir, Ehtome, Elizabeth, Local Rebel, Park, Serenity and MA Miller.

A friend suggested "Fusion", what do you think?  

Corinne

Janet Marie
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9 posted 2000-07-26 09:03 PM


Crystals tinkling in beach breeze,
Spirals shape songs in octaves
Cattails mixing casually
With spiky clusters of triangles.
========================
awesome poem C,
such perfect imagery...
very cool poem...
fusion is a cool title..
jm



There are places inside our souls -
that have never been touched.
There are places inside our hearts -
that need to be loved this much.
~jm~


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10 posted 2000-07-26 09:21 PM


Corinne~
It is an awesome piece.

Personally - I'm blown away with 'Fusion'.

I watched just such an artisan this past weekend create his fragile magic.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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