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Untitled - Suggestions???
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Untitled - Suggestions??? |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion 
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Untitled Painting between the leaded slivers Reflections of orange poppies’ glow Patient hands of the performer Ancient art breathing sand to life. Red heat replies on face and hands Intensifying sea green eyes Glowing with mounting intensity, Applause from this crowd of one. Crystals tinkling in beach breeze, Spirals shape songs in octaves Cattails mixing casually With spiky clusters of triangles. He cares not who will procure It’s the artistry he lives for To be held in sculpting hands Would surely mean passion. © 2000 Corinne Bailey |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Great work, Corinne... sheer delightful poetry... Wonderful... want to call it something... a title? maybe you could call it "A Painter's Passion" regards, sudhir |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Tough one alright...I think I'd just call it The Artist..that may be to simple ... don't know..only know it is very well written and I enjoyed the read......ethome.. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
LOvely clear and corful visions, but I don't have a name. Excellent piece Liz |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
Glass Blown? Breathing Passion...??? Forging Crystal Dreams ??? Something like that maybe Cor? Interesting subject.. |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Very Very lovely Corinne. How about Glass Passions or Sculpting Passsion. Breathing Sand Sculpting Hands... What ever its a wonderful piece. Park |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Incredible, and I did enjoy...and it is a tough one...Full Blown Passion maybe...nah...I love your work...thanks for sharing... |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
nice piece Corinne ... "Stained Glass Passions" |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thank you for your comments and suggestions, Sudhir, Ehtome, Elizabeth, Local Rebel, Park, Serenity and MA Miller. A friend suggested "Fusion", what do you think? Corinne |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Crystals tinkling in beach breeze, Spirals shape songs in octaves Cattails mixing casually With spiky clusters of triangles. ======================== awesome poem C, such perfect imagery... very cool poem... fusion is a cool title.. jm There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Corinne~ It is an awesome piece. Personally - I'm blown away with 'Fusion'. I watched just such an artisan this past weekend create his fragile magic. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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