Open Poetry #8 |
Great Expectations |
Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Great Expectations(With earnest apologies to Charles Dickens) Cursed cursor flashing, harassing, laughing at my lack of knack. I lean back into queen anne cool, annoyed, the fool, wishing only to be spoon fed lemon cream custard in a warm feather bed. |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Apologize for nothing lady, you've brought a smile to my face again! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Claire~ Delightful ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Effigy Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 486disbelief |
devine. Simply devine. Just an effigy to be disgraced, to be defaced. Your need for me has been replaced. |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Claire, where is a spoon when I need one... really sweet this was. Parker |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Marvelously delighting... Claire, you've done it yet again... regards, sudhir |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Loved it, Claire. Not unreasonable at all! Liz |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Chris, a smile is a GOOD thing! Thanks for reading, my friend. Marge, thank you. Blame it on poetic (and other) frustrations! Effigy, there was far too much in my head to hold any of it still enough to write it down last night, so this is what happened. Thanks for your sweet response, my friend. Sudhir, so glad this gave you something to enjoy. Thank you! Liz, thank you for the validation ~ you know, sometimes we just want the demands of the world to leave us be. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
well done, Meadowmuse ... in and out, but effective as hell ... love it ... |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
enjoyed muchly... although I am not sure who this Earnest guy is... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Yum!! |
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