Ever (goin back to my old style for a change)

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Open Poetry #8

Ever (goin back to my old style for a change)

Kevin

Senior Member

since 1999-11-02

Posts 729
Torrington, Ct, Usa

0 posted 2000-07-26 02:28 AM

Empty
ever
my heart
severed
had you
lost you
messed up
cost you
night time
crying
slowly
dying
good night
sweet dreams
hopeless
it seems
cant be
ending
just pre-
tending
never
mending
while de-
fending
secrets
own us
mine con-
done us
yours de-
fy it
keep it
quiet
my hearts
screaming
always
dreaming
but you
woke up
and we
broke up
so I
sleep here
just to
keep fear
from be-
coming
more than
numbing
feelings
faded
rein-
stated
always
with me
you will
still be

Effigy
Member

since 2000-04-11

Posts 486
disbelief

1 posted 2000-07-26 02:31 AM

good. this style fits. very enjoyable read.

Butterflies_dont_cry
Member Elite

since 2000-03-06

Posts 3733
Michigan

2 posted 2000-07-26 02:34 AM

Kevin*
I don't recall reading your "old style"
before...of course at 2:30 a.m. I don't
recall much

Powerfully done...raw
painful emotions...I liked the style and
thought it worked great with the subject,
excellent work~

Marina
Member Elite

since 2000-02-10

Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario

3 posted 2000-07-26 10:03 AM

Every powerful piece Kevin. I like your style !!

Marina

It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen
Marina Crossley

Parker
Member Elite

since 2000-01-06

Posts 3129
ON

4 posted 2000-07-26 01:12 PM

kevin very intense, I don't recall this style either, but I like it.

Parker

Kevin

Senior Member

since 1999-11-02

Posts 729
Torrington, Ct, Usa

5 posted 2000-07-26 07:59 PM

Thanks guys this was a nice thing to look back on after it was finished and this is my old style but pre passions =)

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