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Jacman
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since 2000-06-27
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Dwight Il, US
0 posted 2000-07-25 09:22 PM

Who are you who haunts my mind.
Day and night incessant wandering.
Interrupting my dreams with
sweet visions of rapture.
Bursting through to fog my mind
in daylights gleaming fire.
I search for you in dillegence allway.
The one who will come and take me higher.
In my dreams I cannot se your face,
your form is all about me.
I do not know you yet
but I know I love you
whomever you may be.

jason

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1 posted 2000-07-26 11:37 PM

Jacman~ I really like this a lot -SEA

Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB
Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06
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2 posted 2000-07-26 11:53 PM

Jason*
Great work...the mystery of this piece is wonderful~
Toddles
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since 2000-07-24
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New Orleans, Louisiana
3 posted 2000-07-27 04:06 AM

Nice poem Jason!
Kit McCallum
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4 posted 2000-07-27 06:52 AM

Beautiful Jason!  This has such a lovely, mystical feel about it ... I hope you will find this vision of your dreams!  

Best wishes,
/Kit
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