Open Poetry #8 |
Swans Slumber |
BSC
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A moonbow umbrellas the evening, So peaceful this nights deep hush, Stars in the sky seem spattered, As if from an artists damp brush. Drifting on untethered waters, Away from the dark, shadowed shore, Silhouetted by beams of moonlight, A swan glides into the moor. The reeds bow gently in welcome, As she weaves her way to her mate, A wake of whispering movement, Waters stirred now slowly abate. Nestled together in umber light, They settle in to their dreams, Wings embracing the others heart, Under the moon's softest beams. |
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Elizabeth
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Posts 6871Minnesota |
Another masterpiece, Bonnie. I loved the picture I saw in this one. Your work is always beautiful. Elizabeth Why ME??? |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
great imagery here, BSC ... very nice ... |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Oh Bonnie, which lines do I pick, they are all so good... tremendous images... regards, sudhir |
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L Tiuch Member
since 2000-02-04
Posts 151NY |
How beautiful. The picture your words paint are sheer magic and I love swans! Linda |
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BSC
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Elizabeth, Thanks so much for reading and for your too kind words. MA, Thanks, glad you liked it. Sudhir, Kind sir, I thank you. Linda, Thanks, glad you enjoyed it. Bonnie |
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Kit McCallum
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Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh Bonnie ... this is an absolute delight! The flow and descriptions were just beautiful ... a lovely poem indeed! Best wishes, /Kit |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Bonnie~ such a tender and warm piece...lovely Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Martie
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Posts 28049California |
Bonnie--so beautiful...a moonbow umbrellas the evening...gorgeous...the whole feeling so delicious...I just love this poem! |
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BSC
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Kit, Tracie and Martie, Thank you all for reading and for your kind replies. They are so very appreciated. Bonnie |
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Denise
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Beautiful, Bonnie! What a lovely picture you have painted! Denise |
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Balladeer
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Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Is this what's meant by a swan song? It's beautiful ,Bonnie. You done good.... |
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Gossamerwings Member
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Charming! Absolutely lovely! Gossamerwings ;) |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Bonnie* This is stunning work..the imagery is amazing thank you for sharing your gift to weave with us~ |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
oops!.......was worth two though [This message has been edited by Butterflies_dont_cry (edited 07-25-2000).] |
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monte Junior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 33 |
Moonbow, I can see the swan floating through its light. Again, you have moved my imagination. Great job |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
we can learn a lot from swans ... we can learn a lot from this poem ... too bad some people can't spread those loving arms a little more often Rex |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Bonnie~ This is BEAUTIFUL ! 'A moonbow umbrellas the evening' Splendid ! Just splendid imagery. And being from the South ... I just love those little - 'Suwannee's ... how I love ya' how I love ya' My dear old Suwannee's' ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Elizabeth
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I love those swans, Marge! Elizabeth Why ME??? |
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Toddles Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 396New Orleans, Louisiana |
Nice flow and superbly tender! |
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BSC
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Thank you all for reading and the kind replies, they mean so much. Marge, thanks for the little song and dance. Bonnie |
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