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louisianasweetie
New Member

since 2000-07-16

Posts 9
Metairie, Louisiana, USA

0 posted 2000-07-25 06:33 AM

Me and you
Could this be true?
I've finally found the person I want to be with
That person is...
YOU!

Me and you,
"Us" forever?
Maybe
I can't take being hurt again
If this isn't the way you feel, please let me know

Before I fall deeply, and hopelessly in love with you,
Is this real,
ME AND YOU?

[This message has been edited by louisianasweetie (edited 07-25-2000).]

Richard McDonald
Junior Member

since 2000-07-23

Posts 29
Queensland, Australia

1 posted 2000-07-25 06:44 AM

The questions I recently asked with answers I didn't want to hear. I hope that it is "Us". Congratulations, they are hard to find. Well written and feelings well conveyed.

Jeffrey Carter

Member Elite

since 2000-04-08

Posts 2367
State of constant confusion!

2 posted 2000-07-25 07:00 AM

Oh yeah, I've been down that road before

Hope you get the answer you are looking for

louisianasweetie
New Member

since 2000-07-16

Posts 9
Metairie, Louisiana, USA

3 posted 2000-07-25 07:20 AM

Thanks for the comments on my poem. I hope that everyone who reads it will enjoy it. Thanks again everybody!

Live life to it's fullest, because one day you will be gone and you might regret not having done the things you've wanted to.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2000-07-25 08:53 AM

Enjoyed reading this and you will find out soon enough because love cannot stay hidden for long...hope for the best...James

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

5 posted 2000-07-25 09:24 PM

Too bad there isn't a test we can take to see if we are going to 'click'... nice poem.

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

6 posted 2000-07-26 06:59 PM

I loved this poem very much.Keep it up!!!!!!

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

7 posted 2000-07-26 07:01 PM

I loved this poem very much.Keep it up!!!!!!

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

8 posted 2000-07-26 07:49 PM

louisianasweetie,
Enjoyed your poem, I'll be by to read others as they are posted. Nicely done, "Me and You", hits the spot.

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