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insect
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0 posted 2000-07-15 12:56 PM


Sinful Seduction

Chewy cherry lips softly sucking up sips
Sweet swallowing kisses are desires of my wishes
A hot pulling tug of a hug rolling on the rug
Bare and breathing big breaths of bliss

Long luscious licks in lace of love
Moving magically in a matrix of moans
Time travels through tender touch
Hearts hurled high into the heavens

Swimming in sweat of sinful seduction of soul-mates
Teasing tongues tickling too total torture  
Wonderful words wanting with warm will
Graciously a gift giving goddess



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kaile
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1 posted 2000-07-15 01:05 AM


i enjoyed the alliteration effect here..this must have been a difficult poem to write
Janet Marie
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2 posted 2000-07-15 01:36 AM


oohhhh very tantalizing teasing and tempting..
what time is the party.

excellent alliteration here insect
very creative and sensual
great read...
take care
jm

There are places inside our souls -
that have never been touched.
There are places inside our hearts -
that need to be loved this much.
~jm~

kitkat
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3 posted 2000-07-15 11:19 AM


OOOH this was nice. Made me tingle.
kitkat

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4 posted 2000-07-15 03:38 PM


Insect~

Endearing alliteration.
Extremely well done.
~*Marge*~


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Marsha
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5 posted 2000-07-15 06:22 PM


This was wonderful. Amazing astounding alliteration. Loved it  
Lone Wolf
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6 posted 2000-07-15 09:50 PM


Insect,

WOW!!!  Hey, where do I sign up??  LOL.  Seriously, very nice writing.  Love the alliteration.  

LW


Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

Trew
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7 posted 2000-07-15 10:14 PM


Oh ya!  That was good one.
"Chewy cherry lips..."
Start it off with a bang!  Must've been as fun to write as it was to read.  That was great!

Balladeer
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8 posted 2000-07-15 10:27 PM


Riveting writing ripe with rich revelations of raw realism....


I like your style..

kat
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9 posted 2000-07-15 11:29 PM


Alluring attraction awaits admiration
Written words wonderfully weaved
Breathtaking, beautiful, beholds before me
Soft sensual seductive script


Insect I said I thought your other poem was my favorite but you've outdone yourself with this one. This is very sensual and seductive. I loved it very much.  

kat


insect
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10 posted 2000-07-16 05:41 PM


kaile…Difficult delivery, do devour
            Thank you  

Janet Marie…Gripping grinding, gasping giving grins
                       Thanks gator

kitkat…Tingles of total torture to tomorrow
             Thank you
      
Marge Tindal…That's terrific tenderness taken
                          Thank you
Marsha…Awesome, accelerating astronomical answers
                Thank you

Lone Wolf…Swing over soon sweets to swim in sin
                      Thank you

Trew…BIG BANG beginning bursts beautifully
             Bank you! Oops!
             Thank you

Balladeer…Stylishly strong, spontaneously spreading Spanish-fly
                   Thank you  

kat…Pretty Pickles, perfect pen playing poems
         Persuasive poet periodically pondering
         Pleasingly perched
         PRECIOUS PUSSY

         Thanks Pickles LOL
         Hugs and kisses

        

Parker
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11 posted 2000-07-23 02:27 AM


This is more my style, I like very much.

Parker

brian madden
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12 posted 2000-07-23 05:44 AM


HOT VERY HOT
in fact I think someone should open a window in here. Phew... Now we know who put the "passion" in to poetry.  

why must we pray
screaming? why must not death be redefined? we shut our eyes we stretch out our arms and whirl on a pane of glass-patti smith

insect
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13 posted 2000-07-24 11:13 PM


Haleyja…Merging moves of moist mouths!
                Thank you

brian madden…Passionate pleasures pleasingly putting
                          poetry in peoples posts
                          Thank you
                          Wow! That is an honor! Thank you very much     




[This message has been edited by insect (edited 07-25-2000).]

oh2beme
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14 posted 2000-07-24 11:34 PM


Very much a sinful seduction. Touches one's passionate inner self.

oh2beme


Debbie L. Hoskins

insect
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15 posted 2000-07-25 08:36 PM


oh2beme…insect's imagination is interested in invitations!
                   Thank you

Martie
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16 posted 2000-07-25 08:54 PM


insect--much moving meaning mesmerizes moist moments magically
Butterflies_dont_cry
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17 posted 2000-07-25 08:58 PM


OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO LA LA....uh hum..great
writing I mean  

insect
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18 posted 2000-07-25 10:50 PM


Martie…Magnificent mixture manifested!
               Thank you

Butterflies_don't_cry…Laying lusciously licking liquorice looking lustfully lovely!
                                      Thank you      

Holly
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19 posted 2000-07-25 11:54 PM


WOW! I feel like I need a shower now! LOL THIS POEM ROCKS! Great image, sinfully sweet, & alluring. Just amazing work here. Please keep up the work.
love & all,
-Holly


I know well what I am fleeing from but not what I am in search of.
Michel de Montaigne


insect
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20 posted 2000-07-26 12:32 PM


Holly…Romantically rolling raw rendering release, repeating rhythm!
             Thank you

Butterflies_dont_cry
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21 posted 2000-07-26 12:35 PM


WOW......I enjoyed the replies as much as I
did the poem!!

insect
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22 posted 2000-07-26 12:53 PM


Butterflies_don't_cry…Loaded love-launching liquid lyrics limitlessly!
Thank you again


[This message has been edited by insect (edited 07-26-2000).]

Parker
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23 posted 2000-07-26 01:50 PM


Poetic passion portrayed in pleasing phrase.

Parker

insect
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24 posted 2000-07-26 07:53 PM


Haleyja…Parker professor provides pump post
                 Thank you


insect invites interplanetary interruptions induced into individualization
  

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