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Sinful Seduction
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Sinful Seduction Chewy cherry lips softly sucking up sips Sweet swallowing kisses are desires of my wishes A hot pulling tug of a hug rolling on the rug Bare and breathing big breaths of bliss Long luscious licks in lace of love Moving magically in a matrix of moans Time travels through tender touch Hearts hurled high into the heavens Swimming in sweat of sinful seduction of soul-mates Teasing tongues tickling too total torture Wonderful words wanting with warm will Graciously a gift giving goddess |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i enjoyed the alliteration effect here..this must have been a difficult poem to write  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
oohhhh very tantalizing teasing and tempting.. what time is the party.  excellent alliteration here insect very creative and sensual great read... take care jm There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
OOOH this was nice. Made me tingle. kitkat |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Insect~ Endearing alliteration. Extremely well done. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
This was wonderful. Amazing astounding alliteration. Loved it  |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Insect, WOW!!! Hey, where do I sign up?? LOL. Seriously, very nice writing. Love the alliteration. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Trew Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Ottawa, Canada |
Oh ya! That was good one. "Chewy cherry lips..." Start it off with a bang! Must've been as fun to write as it was to read. That was great! |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Riveting writing ripe with rich revelations of raw realism.... I like your style.. |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
Alluring attraction awaits admiration Written words wonderfully weaved Breathtaking, beautiful, beholds before me Soft sensual seductive script Insect I said I thought your other poem was my favorite but you've outdone yourself with this one. This is very sensual and seductive. I loved it very much. kat |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
kaile…Difficult delivery, do devour Thank you Janet Marie…Gripping grinding, gasping giving grins Thanks gator kitkat…Tingles of total torture to tomorrow Thank you Marge Tindal…That's terrific tenderness taken Thank you Marsha…Awesome, accelerating astronomical answers Thank you Lone Wolf…Swing over soon sweets to swim in sin Thank you Trew…BIG BANG beginning bursts beautifully Bank you! Oops! Thank you Balladeer…Stylishly strong, spontaneously spreading Spanish-fly Thank you kat…Pretty Pickles, perfect pen playing poems Persuasive poet periodically pondering Pleasingly perched PRECIOUS PUSSY Thanks Pickles LOL Hugs and kisses |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
This is more my style, I like very much. Parker |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
HOT VERY HOT in fact I think someone should open a window in here. Phew... Now we know who put the "passion" in to poetry. why must we pray screaming? why must not death be redefined? we shut our eyes we stretch out our arms and whirl on a pane of glass-patti smith |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Haleyja…Merging moves of moist mouths! Thank you brian madden…Passionate pleasures pleasingly putting poetry in peoples posts Thank you Wow! That is an honor! Thank you very much  [This message has been edited by insect (edited 07-25-2000).] |
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oh2beme Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 215NV USA |
Very much a sinful seduction. Touches one's passionate inner self. oh2beme Debbie L. Hoskins |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
oh2beme…insect's imagination is interested in invitations! Thank you |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
insect--much moving meaning mesmerizes moist moments magically |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO LA LA....uh hum..great writing I mean |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Martie…Magnificent mixture manifested! Thank you Butterflies_don't_cry…Laying lusciously licking liquorice looking lustfully lovely! Thank you |
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Holly Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 127Arkansas |
WOW! I feel like I need a shower now! LOL THIS POEM ROCKS! Great image, sinfully sweet, & alluring. Just amazing work here. Please keep up the work. love & all, -Holly I know well what I am fleeing from but not what I am in search of. Michel de Montaigne |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Holly…Romantically rolling raw rendering release, repeating rhythm! Thank you |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
WOW......I enjoyed the replies as much as I did the poem!! |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Butterflies_don't_cry…Loaded love-launching liquid lyrics limitlessly! Thank you again [This message has been edited by insect (edited 07-26-2000).] |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Poetic passion portrayed in pleasing phrase. Parker |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Haleyja…Parker professor provides pump post Thank you insect invites interplanetary interruptions induced into individualization |
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