Open Poetry #8 |
The Land Of Make Believe |
juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Lets take a journey, Just you and me. Lets go to the land of make believe. Now close your eyes, And free your mind. Step into the world, Of color and rhyme. My oh my, whats that I see? Why its a fairy, Dancing around a tree. Look at her wings, All sparkled with gold. And look over there, Oh my goodness, Its a bright pink toad. Listen to the flowers, Oh how they do sing. Do you see that horse? He has purple wings. Ah look its a castle, And its painted bright green. And there is a brook, Made of caramel creme. Now who is this fair princess? Dressed in silver and blue. Well for heavens sake, I do believe its YOU. Written just for my baby girl, Maddie. [This message has been edited by juliet_2u (edited 07-25-2000).] |
||
© Copyright 2000 Juliet_2u - All Rights Reserved | |||
Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
ohhhhhhhhh..this is so sweet...and has a magical quality. Well done! K |
||
juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Severn, thank you very much and talk about sweet, that would be my Maddie. Thanks again, Juls |
||
Heather Miller Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 409Bryan, Ohio USA |
Oh Juls, That was so beautiful and sweet, and well oh my goodness........AWSOME WOW!!!!!!!!! LITL, Heather With God all things are possible. |
||
Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
ditto Kamla (severn) on this one!!! Excellent work Juliet regards, sudhir |
||
juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Heather thank you so much girl friend. Hugs, Juls Sudhir, again I'm honored.Thank you heaps, Juls |
||
MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
as beautiful as the name..Maddie is ~~soft smiles Maureen |
||
Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Juls what a wonderful momma you are to spin such tales for your own little princess never say never |
||
juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Maureen, thank you very much. Your comments made me smile also. Juls Paula, I could ask for no higher compliment. Thank you so much, Juls |
||
⇧ top of page ⇧ | ||
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. |