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juliet_2u
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since 2000-07-23
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North Carolina

0 posted 2000-07-25 04:19 AM


Lets take a journey,
Just you and me.
Lets go to the land of make believe.
Now close your eyes,
And free your mind.
Step into the world,
Of color and rhyme.

My oh my, whats that I see?
Why its a fairy,
Dancing around a tree.
Look at her wings,
All sparkled with gold.
And look over there,
Oh my goodness,
Its a bright pink toad.
Listen to the flowers,
Oh how they do sing.
Do you see that horse?
He has purple wings.
Ah look its a castle,
And its painted bright green.
And there is a brook,
Made of caramel creme.
Now who is this fair princess?
Dressed in silver and blue.
Well for heavens sake,
I do believe its YOU.

Written just for my baby girl, Maddie.




[This message has been edited by juliet_2u (edited 07-25-2000).]

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Severn
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since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

1 posted 2000-07-25 06:09 AM


ohhhhhhhhh..this is so sweet...and has a magical quality.

Well done!

K

juliet_2u
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since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125
North Carolina
2 posted 2000-07-25 09:18 AM


Severn, thank you very much and talk about sweet, that would be my Maddie. Thanks again,
     Juls

Heather Miller
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since 2000-07-19
Posts 409
Bryan, Ohio USA
3 posted 2000-07-25 09:55 AM


Oh Juls, That was so beautiful and sweet, and well oh my goodness........AWSOME    
WOW!!!!!!!!!
LITL,
Heather


With God all things are possible.

Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
4 posted 2000-07-25 09:59 AM


ditto Kamla (severn) on this one!!!

Excellent work Juliet

regards,
sudhir

juliet_2u
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since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125
North Carolina
5 posted 2000-07-25 10:37 AM


Heather thank you so much girl friend. Hugs, Juls

Sudhir, again I'm honored.Thank you heaps, Juls

MMoonchild
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since 2000-07-13
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PA
6 posted 2000-07-25 10:51 AM


as beautiful as the name..Maddie is
~~soft smiles
Maureen

Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
7 posted 2000-07-25 02:45 PM


Juls what a wonderful momma you are to spin such tales for your own little princess

never say never

juliet_2u
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since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125
North Carolina
8 posted 2000-07-25 02:56 PM


Maureen, thank you very much. Your comments made me smile also.  Juls

Paula, I could ask for no higher compliment. Thank you so much, Juls

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