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Thoughts of you
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA 
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Thoughts of amber, Feelings of gold, The very thought of you melted it all, Breath of passion, Sigh of relieve, These are the thoughts I choose to believe, Unrealistic dreams, Followed by ear shattering screams, Thought of falling atop this endless brim, Quietness I seek, Between two lonely peaks, Such thoughts vanish, As you arrive bearing my kiss. Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Woo Hoo, that was great  I loved it.Sauni |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Saunni, I want to personally thank you for your comments, you have kept me going with poems such as these. Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Finally I find you...this is great I really enjoyed this read never say never |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Thoughts of amber, Feelings of gold, The very thought of you melted it all, beautiful, Xeonox you could turn this into a haiku... Thinking of amber Blending thoughts of you, feelings Melting into gold just fooling with your words... ~~softly thanking you Maureen |
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