I Think, I Feel, I know - The Love Of A Friend

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Open Poetry #8

I Think, I Feel, I know - The Love Of A Friend

Richard McDonald
Junior Member

since 2000-07-23

Posts 29
Queensland, Australia

0 posted 2000-07-23 09:44 PM

I sit here and I think about how I feel,
About You, About Me, About us.
I think I feel,
No!
I know I feel.
And I know that you know I feel,
And I know that you feel it too,

You?

I feel the love of a friend,
Who feels but forbids themself to.
I feel the love of a friend,
Who wants to love but can't.
I feel the love of a friend
Who can't know the love that is afforded them.

Me?

I love with the love of a friend.
I love deeper than the love of a friend,
A depth unknown, A breadth forbiden.
I love, and can't stop loving, despite what comes between.

Us?

We feel a love that connects us as friends,
We feel a love that is deeper, and wider than friendship knows,
We feel a love that... Is bound by this world.
A world which knows differences, which knows age, which gives love.

So?

As we sit in a room together, and
As I watch you from a distance, and
As I love you from afar,

I think of what could be,
I feel a love for you, but
I know it cannot be.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2000-07-23 09:57 PM

RichardMc~
Welcome to the friends of Passions In Poetry.

Enjoyed your entrance and your admiration
from afar for someone it seems you'd like
to make more than a friend.

Hope you enjoy your stay with us.
Lots of great people here !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

louisianasweetie
New Member

since 2000-07-16

Posts 9
Metairie, Louisiana, USA

2 posted 2000-07-25 07:29 AM

You write so well. Keep up the good work and welcome to Passions in Poetry.

Live life to it's fullest, because one day you will be gone and you might regret not having done the things you've wanted to.

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

3 posted 2000-07-25 02:37 PM

Richard welcome to Passions...and what an entrance you have made. The longing in this is so intense...wanting more than can be given.

never say never

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

4 posted 2000-07-25 02:46 PM

sigh...you and me both...but a smile goes out to you for saying this so well...I thank you.

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