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rosepetals25
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0 posted 2000-07-25 03:11 AM


I sit and look at you tonight
I see the love in your eyes
And I wonder what I have done
To deserve wonderful gift

You have done so much
Without even knowing
Taught me how to love
Taught me how to love myself

The way you look at me
The way you touch me
All the love you show me
I am thankful beyond words

I promise to cherish you
To love you until the end of time
And never forget how lucky I am
To have you by my side



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MMoonchild
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1 posted 2000-07-25 12:21 PM


very sweet, rose...
~~softly
Maureen

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2 posted 2000-07-25 09:26 PM


Enjoyed your poem..check this out:
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rosepetals25
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3 posted 2000-07-26 11:09 AM


Thank you Maureen  
And..hehe.. thank you poet.  Some one emailed me and told me the same thing. Classic newbie mistake..hehe but .. I have learned my lesson.     It was a clever poem though.  Thank you.

Mark Bohannan
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4 posted 2000-07-26 12:36 PM


I sit and look at you tonight
I see the love in your eyes
And I wonder what I have done
To deserve wonderful gift
You have done so much
Without even knowing
Taught me how to love
Taught me how to love myself

The way you look at me
The way you touch me
All the love you show me
I am thankful beyond words

I promise to cherish you
To love you until the end of time
And never forget how lucky I am
To have you by my side

Sweet and from the heart.

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