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MysticalNights
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since 2000-05-17
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Oklahoma

0 posted 2000-07-25 02:07 AM





What is this I feel
Why do I feel it
What did you do

How did you get inside of me
A place known only by few

Why does my mind wander
My soul stir
What have you done

A constant passion’s fire burns
In little time, my heart you’ve won

Why am I so scared
Yet feeling joy
I’m so confused

A brief moment of serenity
Then a fear of being used

Are we playing games
Is this real
Please answer me

I can see us being happy
Beside you I long to be

Have I said too much
Or not enough
Always had the best intentions

But for now I sit alone
And ponder my little questions


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Xeonox
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1 posted 2000-07-25 02:38 AM


My friend I too ponder such questions. Great little poem you have written there. Bring on some more stuff so I can read.  

Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
2 posted 2000-07-25 03:01 AM


aww to only have all the answers we need.  lovely write.
MysticalNights
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since 2000-05-17
Posts 112
Oklahoma
3 posted 2000-07-25 05:46 AM


Xeonox-  I just started writing poetry not too long ago, so I don't have much, but have posted a few.  In open and adult.  But glad you enjoyed this one.

Mark-  Glad you liked it.

Thank you for your replies.

MysticalNights

Richard McDonald
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since 2000-07-23
Posts 29
Queensland, Australia
4 posted 2000-07-25 06:33 AM


I've been writing many poems similar to this over past weeks and I really enjoyed yours and can absolutely relate to it. You've put a whole lot of feeling into few lines. I'd love to know the background to it so e:mail me if you like! Thanks!
kat
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since 2000-05-20
Posts 387

5 posted 2000-07-25 06:19 PM


So many questions in such a short space. I loved it! I think alot of us can say we've been there. Sometimes people come into our lives when something in our own life is missing and we find what we are missing in them. When we find that we tend to open up in ways that we've never opened up before. They accept us for who we are and we want to be with them for the way they make us feel. We develop feelings for them and we want them in our lives because we feel that we'd be happy with them and they would be happy with us. It's always great when you can find someone that is compatible and that you can open up to. Ok well, I tried to answer some of the questions you may have been pondering. LOL
Now time for the poem. I thought it was great!!  

kat


juliet_2u
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since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125
North Carolina
6 posted 2000-07-25 11:44 PM


I sure could relate to this one. Loved it...Juls
Holly
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since 2000-05-12
Posts 127
Arkansas
7 posted 2000-07-25 11:47 PM


Mystical-
Great work..as always. If you find those answers do you mind sending me your cheat sheet? hehe I need some help too!  
love & all,
-Holly


I know well what I am fleeing from but not what I am in search of.
Michel de Montaigne


MysticalNights
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since 2000-05-17
Posts 112
Oklahoma
8 posted 2000-07-26 12:19 PM


Richard-  Glad you enjoyed it.

kat-  Thank you for your insight.  You are so right in everything you said.  Happy you liked the read.

Juls-  Glad you loved it.

Holly-  As soon as i get those answers, you'll be the first to get a copy!  Glad you liked it.

Thank you all

MysticalNights

Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733
Michigan
9 posted 2000-07-26 12:39 PM


Your little questions have been playing in my soul for a while now....so many can relate
to this time and this place, not an easy one
nor are the quesions easily answered....you
penned the feelings so very well~

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