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MysticalNights Member
since 2000-05-17
Posts 112Oklahoma 
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What is this I feel Why do I feel it What did you do How did you get inside of me A place known only by few Why does my mind wander My soul stir What have you done A constant passion’s fire burns In little time, my heart you’ve won Why am I so scared Yet feeling joy I’m so confused A brief moment of serenity Then a fear of being used Are we playing games Is this real Please answer me I can see us being happy Beside you I long to be Have I said too much Or not enough Always had the best intentions But for now I sit alone And ponder my little questions |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
My friend I too ponder such questions. Great little poem you have written there. Bring on some more stuff so I can read.  Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
aww to only have all the answers we need. lovely write. |
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MysticalNights Member
since 2000-05-17
Posts 112Oklahoma |
Xeonox- I just started writing poetry not too long ago, so I don't have much, but have posted a few. In open and adult. But glad you enjoyed this one. Mark- Glad you liked it. Thank you for your replies. MysticalNights |
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Richard McDonald Junior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 29Queensland, Australia |
I've been writing many poems similar to this over past weeks and I really enjoyed yours and can absolutely relate to it. You've put a whole lot of feeling into few lines. I'd love to know the background to it so e:mail me if you like! Thanks! |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
So many questions in such a short space. I loved it! I think alot of us can say we've been there. Sometimes people come into our lives when something in our own life is missing and we find what we are missing in them. When we find that we tend to open up in ways that we've never opened up before. They accept us for who we are and we want to be with them for the way they make us feel. We develop feelings for them and we want them in our lives because we feel that we'd be happy with them and they would be happy with us. It's always great when you can find someone that is compatible and that you can open up to. Ok well, I tried to answer some of the questions you may have been pondering. LOL Now time for the poem. I thought it was great!! kat |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
I sure could relate to this one. Loved it...Juls |
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Holly Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 127Arkansas |
Mystical- Great work..as always. If you find those answers do you mind sending me your cheat sheet? hehe I need some help too!  love & all, -Holly I know well what I am fleeing from but not what I am in search of. Michel de Montaigne |
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MysticalNights Member
since 2000-05-17
Posts 112Oklahoma |
Richard- Glad you enjoyed it. kat- Thank you for your insight. You are so right in everything you said. Happy you liked the read. Juls- Glad you loved it. Holly- As soon as i get those answers, you'll be the first to get a copy! Glad you liked it. Thank you all MysticalNights |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Your little questions have been playing in my soul for a while now....so many can relate to this time and this place, not an easy one nor are the quesions easily answered....you penned the feelings so very well~ |
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