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rojogrande
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since 2000-04-10
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Fullerton, CA, USA

0 posted 2000-06-10 08:30 PM


SAD STILL CHEST
MINUS RISE AND FALL
ASLEEP FOREVER IN A SILVER BOX
HE PASSES THROUGH THE ROOM
COLD HAND TOUCHING DYING HEARTS
AS SILENT TEARS FALL
NO MORE


(IN LOVING MEMORY:
HELEN COUTEE
D. JUNE 5, 2000)

© Copyright 2000 Matt Westmoreland - All Rights Reserved
Kit McCallum
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1 posted 2000-06-10 08:37 PM


This is so touching Rojogrande ... your heartfelt words were expressed beautifully.

Best wishes to you,
/Kit

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2000-06-10 09:28 PM


Rio~
So sorry, hon.
*HUGS*
~*Marge*~


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Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733
Michigan
3 posted 2000-06-10 09:33 PM


My sympathy and Hugs go out to you, I'm so sorry for your Loss. Thank you for sharing this dedication.
SpitFire
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since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

4 posted 2000-06-10 11:58 PM


~Peace for your healing heart. This poem was a well written expression and I'd like to thank you for sharing it.  Take care.
Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
5 posted 2000-07-17 07:28 AM


A sad and heartfelt dedication....HUGS!!
Good piece!!
Take Care
Bridgette  


"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

Severn
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since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

6 posted 2000-07-17 10:09 AM


A beautiful expression...thankyou for sharing it here with us.

Many hugs and many thoughts

K

[This message has been edited by Severn (edited 07-17-2000).]

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